Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs v2 0/5] improve & unify installation(-related) documentation

[Christoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com>]

v3: https://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2024-March/062314.html

On Mon, Mar 11, 2024 at 01:29:06PM +0100, Christoph Heiss wrote:
> This series in short tries to bring the documentation for the
> ISO installation flow and anything related to it in line the with
> respective documentation for PMG. As both products use the same
> installer (minus small differences such as LVM options and BTRFS
> support) and overall same basic system setup, it is worth unifying them.
>
> There is (of course) still room for improvement, esp. regarding the apt
> repo/update section as pointed out by Alex. Still like to get this in
> rather sooner than later, to not diverge even more.
>
> I'll send the appropriate pmg-docs series (see v1 of that [0]) when this
> has been finalized & applied, to keep it transparent and easier to
> reason about.
>
> [0] https://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pmg-devel/2024-March/002870.html
>
> Revision history
> ----------------
> v1: https://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2024-March/062056.html
>
> Notable changes v1 -> v2:
>   * dropped already-applied patches
>   * slight rewording in some places based on suggestions
>
> Christoph Heiss (5):
>   package-repos: improve wording partly based on pmg-docs
>   installation: iso: improve & align wording with pmg-docs
>   installation: lvm-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs
>   installation: zfs-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs
>   installation: iso: reflow location and password dialog screenshots
>
>  pve-installation.adoc  | 144 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------
>  pve-package-repos.adoc |  26 ++++----
>  2 files changed, 107 insertions(+), 63 deletions(-)
>
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> 2.43.0
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