From: "Gabriel Goller" <g.goller@proxmox.com>
To: "Proxmox VE development discussion" <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>
Subject: Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 6/9] installation: iso: improve & align wording with pmg-docs
Date: Tue, 05 Mar 2024 09:38:02 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <CZLOI6WWHREK.1MX3TIYZ8KPPS@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240304132221.901327-7-c.heiss@proxmox.com>
On Mon Mar 4, 2024 at 2:22 PM CET, Christoph Heiss wrote:
> +When copying and setting up the packages has finished, you can reboot the
> +server. This will be done automatically after a few seconds by default.
I would remove the `by default` so that the sentence becomes:
This will be done automatically after a few seconds.
> +. Log in using the `root` (realm 'PAM') username and the password chosen during
> +installation.
I think you need to fix the indentation here...
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2024-03-05 8:38 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 18+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2024-03-04 13:22 [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 0/9] improve & unify installation(-related) documentation Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 1/9] gitignore: add package build outputs Christoph Heiss
2024-03-06 17:16 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 2/9] asciidoc: introduce `pricing-url` variable, much like pmg-docs Christoph Heiss
2024-03-06 17:16 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 3/9] local-btrfs: unify casing for btrfs Christoph Heiss
2024-03-06 17:19 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 4/9] getting-help: forum: align wording with pmg-docs Christoph Heiss
2024-03-06 17:19 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 5/9] package-repos: " Christoph Heiss
2024-03-05 8:28 ` Gabriel Goller
2024-03-05 12:00 ` Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 6/9] installation: iso: improve & " Christoph Heiss
2024-03-05 8:38 ` Gabriel Goller [this message]
2024-03-05 12:05 ` Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 7/9] installation: lvm-options: " Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 8/9] installation: zfs-options: " Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 9/9] installation: iso: reflow location and password dialog screenshots Christoph Heiss
Reply instructions:
You may reply publicly to this message via plain-text email
using any one of the following methods:
* Save the following mbox file, import it into your mail client,
and reply-to-all from there: mbox
Avoid top-posting and favor interleaved quoting:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Posting_style#Interleaved_style
* Reply using the --to, --cc, and --in-reply-to
switches of git-send-email(1):
git send-email \
--in-reply-to=CZLOI6WWHREK.1MX3TIYZ8KPPS@proxmox.com \
--to=g.goller@proxmox.com \
--cc=pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com \
/path/to/YOUR_REPLY
https://kernel.org/pub/software/scm/git/docs/git-send-email.html
* If your mail client supports setting the In-Reply-To header
via mailto: links, try the mailto: link
Be sure your reply has a Subject: header at the top and a blank line
before the message body.
This is a public inbox, see mirroring instructions
for how to clone and mirror all data and code used for this inbox