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* [pve-devel] [PATCH installer] install module: getters: correctly use plural in error messages
@ 2024-04-25  8:40 Alexander Zeidler
  2024-04-25  8:40 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH installer] assistant: fix spelling and precise text in help usage output Alexander Zeidler
  2024-04-25 15:53 ` [pve-devel] applied-series: [PATCH installer] install module: getters: correctly use plural in error messages Thomas Lamprecht
  0 siblings, 2 replies; 3+ messages in thread
From: Alexander Zeidler @ 2024-04-25  8:40 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: pve-devel

Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
---
 Proxmox/Install.pm | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Proxmox/Install.pm b/Proxmox/Install.pm
index 6ad9d17..c0f8955 100644
--- a/Proxmox/Install.pm
+++ b/Proxmox/Install.pm
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ sub get_zfs_raid_setup {
 	    $cmd .= " @$hd[1]";
 	}
     } elsif ($filesys eq 'zfs (RAID1)') {
-	die "zfs (RAID1) needs at least 2 device\n" if $diskcount < 2;
+	die "zfs (RAID1) needs at least 2 devices\n" if $diskcount < 2;
 	$cmd .= ' mirror ';
 	my $hd = @$devlist[0];
 	my $expected_size = @$hd[2]; # all disks need approximately same size
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ sub get_zfs_raid_setup {
 	    $cmd .= " @$hd[1]";
 	}
     } elsif ($filesys eq 'zfs (RAID10)') {
-	die "zfs (RAID10) needs at least 4 device\n" if $diskcount < 4;
+	die "zfs (RAID10) needs at least 4 devices\n" if $diskcount < 4;
 	die "zfs (RAID10) needs an even number of devices\n" if $diskcount & 1;
 
 	for (my $i = 0; $i < $diskcount; $i+=2) {
@@ -329,10 +329,10 @@ sub get_btrfs_raid_setup {
 	if ($filesys eq 'btrfs (RAID0)') {
 	    $mode = 'raid0';
 	} elsif ($filesys eq 'btrfs (RAID1)') {
-	    die "btrfs (RAID1) needs at least 2 device\n" if $diskcount < 2;
+	    die "btrfs (RAID1) needs at least 2 devices\n" if $diskcount < 2;
 	    $mode = 'raid1';
 	} elsif ($filesys eq 'btrfs (RAID10)') {
-	    die "btrfs (RAID10) needs at least 4 device\n" if $diskcount < 4;
+	    die "btrfs (RAID10) needs at least 4 devices\n" if $diskcount < 4;
 	    $mode = 'raid10';
 	} else {
 	    die "unknown btrfs mode '$filesys'\n";
-- 
2.39.2



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* [pve-devel] [PATCH installer] assistant: fix spelling and precise text in help usage output
  2024-04-25  8:40 [pve-devel] [PATCH installer] install module: getters: correctly use plural in error messages Alexander Zeidler
@ 2024-04-25  8:40 ` Alexander Zeidler
  2024-04-25 15:53 ` [pve-devel] applied-series: [PATCH installer] install module: getters: correctly use plural in error messages Thomas Lamprecht
  1 sibling, 0 replies; 3+ messages in thread
From: Alexander Zeidler @ 2024-04-25  8:40 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: pve-devel

Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
---
 proxmox-auto-install-assistant/src/main.rs | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/proxmox-auto-install-assistant/src/main.rs b/proxmox-auto-install-assistant/src/main.rs
index 9bc083e..0debd29 100644
--- a/proxmox-auto-install-assistant/src/main.rs
+++ b/proxmox-auto-install-assistant/src/main.rs
@@ -91,16 +91,16 @@ struct CommandValidateAnswer {
 
 /// Prepare an ISO for automated installation.
 ///
-/// The behavior of how to fetch an answer file must be set with the '--fetch-from', parameter. The
+/// The behavior of how to fetch an answer file must be set with the '--fetch-from' parameter. The
 /// answer file can be:{n}
 /// * integrated into the ISO itself ('iso'){n}
-/// * needs to be present in a partition / file-system with the label 'PROXMOX-AIS' (Proxmox
+/// * present on a partition / file-system with the label 'PROXMOX-AIS' (Proxmox
 /// Automated Installer Source) ('partition'){n}
-/// * get requested via an HTTP Post request ('http').
+/// * requested via an HTTP Post request ('http').
 ///
 /// The URL for the HTTP mode can be defined for the ISO with the '--url' argument. If not present,
-/// it will try to get a URL from a DHCP option (250, TXT) or by querying a DNS TXT record at
-/// 'proxmox-auto-installer.{search domain}'.
+/// it will try to get a URL from a DHCP option (250, TXT) or by querying a DNS TXT record for the
+/// domain 'proxmox-auto-installer.{search domain}'.
 ///
 /// The TLS certificate fingerprint can either be defined via the '--cert-fingerprint' argument or
 /// alternatively via the custom DHCP option (251, TXT) or in a DNS TXT record located at
-- 
2.39.2



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* [pve-devel] applied-series: [PATCH installer] install module: getters: correctly use plural in error messages
  2024-04-25  8:40 [pve-devel] [PATCH installer] install module: getters: correctly use plural in error messages Alexander Zeidler
  2024-04-25  8:40 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH installer] assistant: fix spelling and precise text in help usage output Alexander Zeidler
@ 2024-04-25 15:53 ` Thomas Lamprecht
  1 sibling, 0 replies; 3+ messages in thread
From: Thomas Lamprecht @ 2024-04-25 15:53 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Proxmox VE development discussion, Alexander Zeidler

Am 25/04/2024 um 10:40 schrieb Alexander Zeidler:
> Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
> ---
>  Proxmox/Install.pm | 8 ++++----
>  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
> 
>

applied both patches, thanks!


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