From: Fiona Ebner <f.ebner@proxmox.com>
To: Proxmox VE development discussion <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>,
Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
Subject: [pve-devel] applied: [PATCH docs] pve-network: correct language errors
Date: Tue, 13 Aug 2024 15:57:16 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <693d86ca-fb84-4d7c-bad7-ea6922f581ed@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240813102305.6-2-a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
Am 13.08.24 um 12:23 schrieb Alexander Zeidler:
> Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
> ---
> pve-network.adoc | 4 ++--
> 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/pve-network.adoc b/pve-network.adoc
> index acdcf39..434430d 100644
> --- a/pve-network.adoc
> +++ b/pve-network.adoc
> @@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ slaves in the single logical bonded interface such that different
> network-peers use different MAC addresses for their network packet
> traffic.
>
> -If your switch support the LACP (IEEE 802.3ad) protocol then we recommend using
> +If your switch supports the LACP (IEEE 802.3ad) protocol then we recommend using
> the corresponding bonding mode (802.3ad). Otherwise you should generally use the
> active-backup mode.
>
> @@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ iface vmbr0 inet static
>
>
> [thumbnail="default-network-setup-bond.svg"]
> -Another possibility it to use the bond directly as bridge port.
> +Another possibility is to use the bond directly as bridge port.
> This can be used to make the guest network fault-tolerant.
>
> .Example: Use a bond as bridge port
applied, thanks! While adding the missing comma Lukas noted and his R-b.
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Thread overview: 4+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2024-08-13 10:23 [pve-devel] " Alexander Zeidler
2024-08-13 10:49 ` Lukas Wagner
2024-08-13 13:57 ` Fiona Ebner [this message]
2024-08-13 13:58 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Fiona Ebner
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