[pve-devel] [PATCH pve-docs 1/3] Fix typos and wording

[pve-devel] [PATCH pve-docs 1/3] Fix typos and wording

[Dylan Whyte]

Update some lines to fix spelling and grammatical errors

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
---
 certificate-management.adoc | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/certificate-management.adoc b/certificate-management.adoc
index ce9081d..00633a1 100644
--- a/certificate-management.adoc
+++ b/certificate-management.adoc
@@ -104,12 +104,12 @@ the {pve} cluster under your operation, are the real owner of a domain. This is
 the basis building block for automatic certificate management.
 
 The ACME protocol specifies different types of challenges, for example the
-`http-01` where a webserver provides a file with a certain value to proof that
+`http-01` where a webserver provides a file with a certain value to prove that
 it controls a domain. Sometimes this isn't possible, either because of
 technical limitations or if the address a domain points to is not reachable
-from the public internet. For such cases one could use the `dns-01` challenge.
-That challenge provides also a certain value, but not over a text file, but
-through a DNS record on the authority name server of the domain.
+from the public internet. For such cases, one could use the `dns-01` challenge.
+This challenge also provides a certain value, but through a DNS record on the
+authority name server of the domain, rather than over a text file.
 
 [thumbnail="screenshot/gui-datacenter-acme-overview.png"]
 
-- 
2.20.1

Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH pve-docs 1/3] Fix typos and wording

[Oguz Bektas]

lgtm

On Wed, Jul 15, 2020 at 04:26:06PM +0200, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> Update some lines to fix spelling and grammatical errors
> 
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
>  certificate-management.adoc | 8 ++++----
>  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/certificate-management.adoc b/certificate-management.adoc
> index ce9081d..00633a1 100644
> --- a/certificate-management.adoc
> +++ b/certificate-management.adoc
> @@ -104,12 +104,12 @@ the {pve} cluster under your operation, are the real owner of a domain. This is
>  the basis building block for automatic certificate management.
>  
>  The ACME protocol specifies different types of challenges, for example the
> -`http-01` where a webserver provides a file with a certain value to proof that
> +`http-01` where a webserver provides a file with a certain value to prove that
>  it controls a domain. Sometimes this isn't possible, either because of
>  technical limitations or if the address a domain points to is not reachable
> -from the public internet. For such cases one could use the `dns-01` challenge.
> -That challenge provides also a certain value, but not over a text file, but
> -through a DNS record on the authority name server of the domain.
> +from the public internet. For such cases, one could use the `dns-01` challenge.
> +This challenge also provides a certain value, but through a DNS record on the
> +authority name server of the domain, rather than over a text file.
>  
>  [thumbnail="screenshot/gui-datacenter-acme-overview.png"]
>  
> -- 
> 2.20.1
> 
> 
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Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH pve-docs 1/3] Fix typos and wording

[Thomas Lamprecht]

On 15.07.20 16:26, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> Update some lines to fix spelling and grammatical errors
> 
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
>  certificate-management.adoc | 8 ++++----
>  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/certificate-management.adoc b/certificate-management.adoc
> index ce9081d..00633a1 100644
> --- a/certificate-management.adoc
> +++ b/certificate-management.adoc
> @@ -104,12 +104,12 @@ the {pve} cluster under your operation, are the real owner of a domain. This is
>  the basis building block for automatic certificate management.
>  
>  The ACME protocol specifies different types of challenges, for example the
> -`http-01` where a webserver provides a file with a certain value to proof that
> +`http-01` where a webserver provides a file with a certain value to prove that
>  it controls a domain. Sometimes this isn't possible, either because of
>  technical limitations or if the address a domain points to is not reachable
> -from the public internet. For such cases one could use the `dns-01` challenge.
> -That challenge provides also a certain value, but not over a text file, but
> -through a DNS record on the authority name server of the domain.
> +from the public internet. For such cases, one could use the `dns-01` challenge.
> +This challenge also provides a certain value, but through a DNS record on the
> +authority name server of the domain, rather than over a text file.
>  
>  [thumbnail="screenshot/gui-datacenter-acme-overview.png"]
>  
> 

[pve-devel] applied: [PATCH pve-docs 1/3] Fix typos and wording

[Thomas Lamprecht]

On 15.07.20 16:26, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> Update some lines to fix spelling and grammatical errors
> 
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
>  certificate-management.adoc | 8 ++++----
>  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
> 
>

applied, thanks!