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From: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH installer] assistant: fix spelling and precise text in help usage output
Date: Thu, 25 Apr 2024 10:40:22 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20240425084022.73416-2-a.zeidler@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240425084022.73416-1-a.zeidler@proxmox.com>

Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
---
 proxmox-auto-install-assistant/src/main.rs | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/proxmox-auto-install-assistant/src/main.rs b/proxmox-auto-install-assistant/src/main.rs
index 9bc083e..0debd29 100644
--- a/proxmox-auto-install-assistant/src/main.rs
+++ b/proxmox-auto-install-assistant/src/main.rs
@@ -91,16 +91,16 @@ struct CommandValidateAnswer {
 
 /// Prepare an ISO for automated installation.
 ///
-/// The behavior of how to fetch an answer file must be set with the '--fetch-from', parameter. The
+/// The behavior of how to fetch an answer file must be set with the '--fetch-from' parameter. The
 /// answer file can be:{n}
 /// * integrated into the ISO itself ('iso'){n}
-/// * needs to be present in a partition / file-system with the label 'PROXMOX-AIS' (Proxmox
+/// * present on a partition / file-system with the label 'PROXMOX-AIS' (Proxmox
 /// Automated Installer Source) ('partition'){n}
-/// * get requested via an HTTP Post request ('http').
+/// * requested via an HTTP Post request ('http').
 ///
 /// The URL for the HTTP mode can be defined for the ISO with the '--url' argument. If not present,
-/// it will try to get a URL from a DHCP option (250, TXT) or by querying a DNS TXT record at
-/// 'proxmox-auto-installer.{search domain}'.
+/// it will try to get a URL from a DHCP option (250, TXT) or by querying a DNS TXT record for the
+/// domain 'proxmox-auto-installer.{search domain}'.
 ///
 /// The TLS certificate fingerprint can either be defined via the '--cert-fingerprint' argument or
 /// alternatively via the custom DHCP option (251, TXT) or in a DNS TXT record located at
-- 
2.39.2



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Thread overview: 3+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2024-04-25  8:40 [pve-devel] [PATCH installer] install module: getters: correctly use plural in error messages Alexander Zeidler
2024-04-25  8:40 ` Alexander Zeidler [this message]
2024-04-25 15:53 ` [pve-devel] applied-series: " Thomas Lamprecht

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