From: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH v2 manager] pve7to8: reword and fix typos in description
Date: Fri, 19 Apr 2024 18:33:44 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20240419163345.263086-1-a.zeidler@proxmox.com> (raw)
Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
---
v2:
* incorporate all feedback from v1
v1: https://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2024-April/063252.html
bin/Makefile | 8 ++++----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/bin/Makefile b/bin/Makefile
index 180a91b5..6c5f9b14 100644
--- a/bin/Makefile
+++ b/bin/Makefile
@@ -66,10 +66,10 @@ pve6to7.1:
pve7to8.1:
printf ".TH PVE7TO8 1\n.SH NAME\npve7to8 \- Proxmox VE upgrade checker script for 7.4+ to current 8.x\n" > $@.tmp
- printf ".SH DESCRIPTION\nThis tool will help you to detect common pitfalls and misconfguration\
- before, and during the upgrade of a Proxmox VE system\n" >> $@.tmp
- printf "Any failure must be addressed before the upgrade, and any waring must be addressed, \
- or at least carefully evaluated, if a false-positive is suspected\n" >> $@.tmp
+ printf ".SH DESCRIPTION\nThis tool will help you detect common pitfalls and misconfigurations\
+ before and during the upgrade of a Proxmox VE system.\n" >> $@.tmp
+ printf "Any failures or warnings must be addressed prior to the upgrade.\n" >> $@.tmp
+ printf "If you think that a message is a false-positive for your setup, double-check that before proceeding.\n" >> $@.tmp
printf ".SH SYNOPSIS\npve7to8 [--full]\n" >> $@.tmp
mv $@.tmp $@
--
2.39.2
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