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From: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH manager] pve7to8: reword and fix typos in description
Date: Thu, 18 Apr 2024 09:44:03 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20240418074406.22025-1-a.zeidler@proxmox.com> (raw)

Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
---
 bin/Makefile | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/bin/Makefile b/bin/Makefile
index 180a91b5..aa149c06 100644
--- a/bin/Makefile
+++ b/bin/Makefile
@@ -66,10 +66,10 @@ pve6to7.1:
 
 pve7to8.1:
 	printf ".TH PVE7TO8 1\n.SH NAME\npve7to8 \- Proxmox VE upgrade checker script for 7.4+ to current 8.x\n" > $@.tmp
-	printf ".SH DESCRIPTION\nThis tool will help you to detect common pitfalls and misconfguration\
-	 before, and during the upgrade of a Proxmox VE system\n" >> $@.tmp
-	printf "Any failure must be addressed before the upgrade, and any waring must be addressed, \
-	 or at least carefully evaluated, if a false-positive is suspected\n" >> $@.tmp
+	printf ".SH DESCRIPTION\nThis tool will help you to detect common pitfalls and misconfiguration\
+	 before, and during the upgrade of a Proxmox VE system.\n" >> $@.tmp
+	printf "Any failures or warnings must be addressed prior to the upgrade.\n" >> $@.tmp
+	printf "If you think that a message is a false-positive, check this carefully before proceeding.\n" >> $@.tmp
 	printf ".SH SYNOPSIS\npve7to8 [--full]\n" >> $@.tmp
 	mv $@.tmp $@
 
-- 
2.39.2



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             reply	other threads:[~2024-04-18  7:44 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 4+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2024-04-18  7:44 Alexander Zeidler [this message]
2024-04-18  8:03 ` Stefan Sterz
2024-04-18  8:13   ` Thomas Lamprecht
2024-04-18  8:33     ` Stefan Sterz

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