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From: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com>
To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 7/9] installation: lvm-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs
Date: Mon,  4 Mar 2024 14:22:14 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20240304132221.901327-8-c.heiss@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240304132221.901327-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com>

These changes are the result of basically "diffing" both documentations,
choosing the better prased/sounding sections. Some wording were also
slightly changed as necessary to further improve them.

The equivalent changes will be done for pmg-docs too, to ensure they are
really the same in the end.

Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com>
---
 pve-installation.adoc | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc
index e384f49..c6acc75 100644
--- a/pve-installation.adoc
+++ b/pve-installation.adoc
@@ -245,8 +245,8 @@ Advanced LVM Configuration Options
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 The installer creates a Volume Group (VG) called `pve`, and additional Logical
-Volumes (LVs) called `root`, `data`, and `swap`. To control the size of these
-volumes use:
+Volumes (LVs) called `root`, `data`, and `swap`, if `ext4` or `xfs` is used. To
+control the size of these volumes use:
 
 `hdsize`::
 
@@ -284,8 +284,9 @@ configuration will be adapted accordingly.
 
 `minfree`::
 
-Defines the amount of free space left in the LVM volume group `pve`. With more
-than 128GB storage available the default is 16GB, else `hdsize/8` will be used.
+Defines the amount of free space that should be left in the LVM volume group
+`pmg`. With more than 128GB storage available, the default is 16GB, otherwise
+`hdsize/8` will be used.
 +
 NOTE: LVM requires free space in the VG for snapshot creation (not required for
 lvmthin snapshots).
-- 
2.43.0





  parent reply	other threads:[~2024-03-04 13:22 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 18+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2024-03-04 13:22 [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 0/9] improve & unify installation(-related) documentation Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 1/9] gitignore: add package build outputs Christoph Heiss
2024-03-06 17:16   ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 2/9] asciidoc: introduce `pricing-url` variable, much like pmg-docs Christoph Heiss
2024-03-06 17:16   ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 3/9] local-btrfs: unify casing for btrfs Christoph Heiss
2024-03-06 17:19   ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 4/9] getting-help: forum: align wording with pmg-docs Christoph Heiss
2024-03-06 17:19   ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 5/9] package-repos: " Christoph Heiss
2024-03-05  8:28   ` Gabriel Goller
2024-03-05 12:00     ` Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 6/9] installation: iso: improve & " Christoph Heiss
2024-03-05  8:38   ` Gabriel Goller
2024-03-05 12:05     ` Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` Christoph Heiss [this message]
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 8/9] installation: zfs-options: " Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 9/9] installation: iso: reflow location and password dialog screenshots Christoph Heiss

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