[pve-devel] [PATCH docs 7/9] local-zfs: rephrase ZFS RAID description

[Matthias Heiserer <m.heiserer@proxmox.com>]

I tried to make the performance impact clearer, as what "behave like a number of disks"
actually means wasn't quite clear to me.

Use "in regard to" rather than "in regard of", as I couldn't find
any source that this phrase is (commonly) used in modern english.

Signed-off-by: Matthias Heiserer <m.heiserer@proxmox.com>
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 local-zfs.adoc | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/local-zfs.adoc b/local-zfs.adoc
index 6afc110..0fa06b0 100644
--- a/local-zfs.adoc
+++ b/local-zfs.adoc
@@ -167,17 +167,17 @@ Each `vdev` type has different performance behaviors. The two
 parameters of interest are the IOPS (Input/Output Operations per Second) and
 the bandwidth with which data can be written or read.
 
-A 'mirror' vdev (RAID1) will approximately behave like a single disk in regards
-to both parameters when writing data. When reading data if will behave like the
-number of disks in the mirror.
+A 'mirror' vdev (RAID1) will approximately behave like a single disk in regard
+to both parameters when writing data. When reading data the performance will
+scale linearly with the number of disks in the mirror.
 
 A common situation is to have 4 disks. When setting it up as 2 mirror vdevs
 (RAID10) the pool will have the write characteristics as two single disks in
-regard of IOPS and bandwidth. For read operations it will resemble 4 single
+regard to IOPS and bandwidth. For read operations it will resemble 4 single
 disks.
 
 A 'RAIDZ' of any redundancy level will approximately behave like a single disk
-in regard of IOPS with a lot of bandwidth. How much bandwidth depends on the
+in regard to IOPS with a lot of bandwidth. How much bandwidth depends on the
 size of the RAIDZ vdev and the redundancy level.
 
 For running VMs, IOPS is the more important metric in most situations.
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