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* [pve-devel] [PATCH docs] installation: add missing 'you'
@ 2021-07-13 10:59 Stoiko Ivanov
  2021-08-25 16:32 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 2+ messages in thread
From: Stoiko Ivanov @ 2021-07-13 10:59 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: pve-devel

small glitch I noticed while reading through the pmg-docs

Signed-off-by: Stoiko Ivanov <s.ivanov@proxmox.com>
---
With reformat to 80 characters/line this looks far larger (it only adds a you
in the first part of the sentence)

 pve-installation.adoc | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc
index 59ab25a..74a356c 100644
--- a/pve-installation.adoc
+++ b/pve-installation.adoc
@@ -15,11 +15,11 @@ provided by Proxmox include a complete Debian system as well as all necessary
 TIP: See the xref:faq-support-table[support table in the FAQ] for the
 relationship between {pve} releases and Debian releases.
 
-The installer will guide through the setup, allowing you to partition the local
-disk(s), apply basic system configurations (for example, timezone, language,
-network) and install all required packages. This process should not take more
-than a few minutes. Installing with the provided ISO is the recommended method
-for new and existing users.
+The installer will guide you through the setup, allowing you to partition the
+local disk(s), apply basic system configurations (for example, timezone,
+language, network) and install all required packages. This process should not
+take more than a few minutes. Installing with the provided ISO is the
+recommended method for new and existing users.
 
 Alternatively, {pve} can be installed on top of an existing Debian system. This
 option is only recommended for advanced users because detailed knowledge about
-- 
2.30.2





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