[pve-devel] [PATCH v2 pve-installer] installer: minor language fixup

[pve-devel] [PATCH v2 pve-installer] installer: minor language fixup

[Dylan Whyte]

just some nitpicky changes.

v2:
- remove tag files
@Thomas: Like you thought, they are autogenerated by some vim plugin.
They usually sit quitely in the untracked files, but this time, I guess
I somehow I managed to add them in without noticing.. Apologies!

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
---
 html-pbs/page1.htm  |  2 +-
 html-pve/page1.htm  |  8 ++++----
 html-pve/passwd.htm | 10 +++++-----
 3 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/html-pbs/page1.htm b/html-pbs/page1.htm
index debfdf1..353f780 100644
--- a/html-pbs/page1.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/page1.htm
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
       <tbody><tr>
         <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
         <td valign="top"><b>Please verify the installation target</b><br>
-          The displayed hard disk is used for installation.
+          The displayed hard disk will be used for the installation.
           <br>Warning: All existing partitions and data will be lost.
           <br><br>
         </td>
diff --git a/html-pve/page1.htm b/html-pve/page1.htm
index d76cc8a..0ad0898 100644
--- a/html-pve/page1.htm
+++ b/html-pve/page1.htm
@@ -17,10 +17,10 @@
     <table>
       <tbody><tr><td><b>The Proxmox Installer</b>
 	automatically partitions your hard disk. It installs all required
-	packages and finally makes the system bootable from hard disk.
+	packages and makes the system bootable from the hard disk.
 	All existing partitions and data will be lost.
 	<br><br>
-	Press the Next button to continue installation.
+	Press the Next button to continue the installation.
       </td></tr>
     </tbody></table>
   </p></td>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
       <tbody><tr>
 	<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
 	<td valign="top"><b>Please verify the installation target</b><br>
-	  The displayed hard disk is used for installation.
+	  The displayed hard disk will be used for the installation.
 	  <br>Warning: All existing partitions and data will be lost.
 	  <br><br>
 	</td>
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 	<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
 	<td valign="top" width="560"><b>Graphical user interface</b><br>
 	  Final configuration will be done on the graphical user
-	  interface via a web browser.
+	  interface, via a web browser.
 	  <br><br>
 	</td>
       </tr>
diff --git a/html-pve/passwd.htm b/html-pve/passwd.htm
index b1a8522..1c7d2fc 100644
--- a/html-pve/passwd.htm
+++ b/html-pve/passwd.htm
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@
     <td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p>
     <table>
       <tr><td><b>Proxmox Virtual Environment</b> is a
-	full featured highly secure GNU/Linux system based on Debian.
+	full featured, highly secure GNU/Linux system, based on Debian.
 	<br><br>
-        Please provide the <i>root</i> password in this step.
+        In this step, please provide the <i>root</i> password.
       </td></tr>
     </table>
   </p></td>
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
       <tr>
 	<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
 	<td valign="top"><b>Password:</b>
-	  Please use a strong password. It should have 8 or more characters.
-	  Also combine letters, numbers, and symbols.
+	  Please use a strong password. It should be at least 8 characters long,
+	  and contain a combination of letters, numbers, and symbols.
 	  <br><br>
 	</td>
       </tr>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
       </tr>
       <tr>
 	<td valign="top" width="30"></td>
-	<td valign="top">Press the Next button to continue installation.</td>
+	<td valign="top">Press the Next button to continue the installation.</td>
       </tr>
     </table>
   </p></td>
-- 
2.20.1

[pve-devel] applied: [PATCH v2 pve-installer] installer: minor language fixup

[Thomas Lamprecht]

On 11.12.20 08:55, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> just some nitpicky changes.
> 
> v2:
> - remove tag files
> @Thomas: Like you thought, they are autogenerated by some vim plugin.
> They usually sit quitely in the untracked files, but this time, I guess
> I somehow I managed to add them in without noticing.. Apologies!
> 
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
>  html-pbs/page1.htm  |  2 +-
>  html-pve/page1.htm  |  8 ++++----
>  html-pve/passwd.htm | 10 +++++-----
>  3 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
> 
>

applied, thanks!