From: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH pve-manager] UI: Ceph Wizard: language fixup
Date: Tue, 24 Nov 2020 11:14:47 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20201124101447.12153-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com> (raw)
Improve the language found in the ceph install Wizard.
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
---
www/manager6/ceph/CephInstallWizard.js | 20 ++++++++++----------
1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
diff --git a/www/manager6/ceph/CephInstallWizard.js b/www/manager6/ceph/CephInstallWizard.js
index 801fceea..bc4528e9 100644
--- a/www/manager6/ceph/CephInstallWizard.js
+++ b/www/manager6/ceph/CephInstallWizard.js
@@ -4,19 +4,19 @@ Ext.define('PVE.ceph.CephInstallWizardInfo', {
html: `<h3>Ceph?</h3>
<blockquote cite="https://ceph.com/"><p>"<b>Ceph</b> is a unified,
- distributed storage system designed for excellent performance, reliability
+ distributed storage system, designed for excellent performance, reliability,
and scalability."</p></blockquote>
<p>
- <b>Ceph</b> is currently <b>not installed</b> on this node, click on the
- next button below to start the installation. This wizard will guide you
- through the necessary steps, after the initial installation you will be
- offered to create an initial configuration. The configuration step is only
+ <b>Ceph</b> is currently <b>not installed</b> on this node. This wizard
+ will guide you through the installation. Click on the next button below
+ to begin. After the initial installation, the wizard will offer to create
+ an initial configuration. This configuration step is only
needed once per cluster and will be skipped if a config is already present.
</p>
<p>
- Please take a look at our documentation, by clicking the help button below,
- before starting the installation, if you want to gain deeper knowledge about
- Ceph visit <a target="_blank" href="https://docs.ceph.com/en/latest/">ceph.com</a>.
+ Before starting the installation, please take a look at our documentation,
+ by clicking the help button below. If you want to gain deeper knowledge about
+ Ceph, visit <a target="_blank" href="https://docs.ceph.com/en/latest/">ceph.com</a>.
</p>`,
});
@@ -498,12 +498,12 @@ Ext.define('PVE.ceph.CephInstallWizard', {
bodyBorder: false,
onlineHelp: 'pve_ceph_install',
html: '<h3>Installation successful!</h3>'+
- '<p>The basic installation and configuration is completed, depending on your setup some of the following steps are required to start using Ceph:</p>'+
+ '<p>The basic installation and configuration is complete. Depending on your setup, some of the following steps are required to start using Ceph:</p>'+
'<ol><li>Install Ceph on other nodes</li>'+
'<li>Create additional Ceph Monitors</li>'+
'<li>Create Ceph OSDs</li>'+
'<li>Create Ceph Pools</li></ol>'+
- '<p>To learn more click on the help button below.</p>',
+ '<p>To learn more, click on the help button below.</p>',
listeners: {
activate: function() {
// notify owning container that it should display a help button
--
2.20.1
next reply other threads:[~2020-11-24 10:15 UTC|newest]
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2020-11-24 10:14 Dylan Whyte [this message]
2020-11-24 11:16 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
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