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From: "Dominic Jäger" <d.jaeger@proxmox.com>
To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH manager] vzdump mail: Refactor text part
Date: Mon, 16 Nov 2020 11:14:57 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20201116101457.61771-1-d.jaeger@proxmox.com> (raw)

Less lines, less nesting, less duplicate code, less magic numbers.

Signed-off-by: Dominic Jäger <d.jaeger@proxmox.com>
---
Depends on the previous patch for #3136.

Admittedly, using a sub and ternary operator might be seen as more complex than
just the  if-statements. So I'm not mad if we leave it as it is.
But comparing the (first) parameters of 3 sprintf is not that much fun either.

 PVE/VZDump.pm | 27 ++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/PVE/VZDump.pm b/PVE/VZDump.pm
index 1096d594..aaf8a84d 100644
--- a/PVE/VZDump.pm
+++ b/PVE/VZDump.pm
@@ -258,24 +258,17 @@ sub sendmail {
 
     # text part
     my $text = $err ? "$err\n\n" : '';
-    $text .= sprintf ("%-10s %-20s %-6s %10s %10s  %s\n", qw(VMID NAME STATUS TIME SIZE FILENAME));
+    my $namelength = 20;
+    my $conversions = sub { "%-10s %-${namelength}s %-6s %10s $_[0]  %s\n" };
+    $text .= sprintf ($conversions->("%10s"), qw(VMID NAME STATUS TIME SIZE FILENAME));
     foreach my $task (@$tasklist) {
-	my $vmid = $task->{vmid};
-	if  ($task->{state} eq 'ok') {
-
-	    $text .= sprintf ("%-10s %-20s %-6s %10s %10s  %s\n", $vmid,
-				substr($task->{hostname}, 0, 20),
-				$task->{state},
-				format_time($task->{backuptime}),
-				format_size ($task->{size}),
-				$task->{target});
-	} else {
-	    $text .= sprintf ("%-10s %-20s %-6s %10s %8.2fMB  %s\n", $vmid,
-				substr($task->{hostname}, 0, 20),
-				$task->{state},
-				format_time($task->{backuptime}),
-				0, '-');
-	}
+	my $name = substr($task->{hostname}, 0, $namelength);
+	my $successful = $task->{state} eq 'ok';
+	my $size = $successful ? format_size ($task->{size}) : 0;
+	my $filename = $successful ? $task->{target} : '-';
+	my $size_conversion = $successful ? "%10s": "%8.2fMB";
+	$text .= sprintf($conversions->($size_conversion), $task->{vmid}, $name,
+	    $task->{state}, format_time($task->{backuptime}), $size, $filename);
     }
 
     my $text_log_part;
-- 
2.20.1




             reply	other threads:[~2020-11-16 10:14 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 4+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2020-11-16 10:14 Dominic Jäger [this message]
2020-11-16 17:12 ` Thomas Lamprecht
2020-11-17  8:35   ` Dominic Jäger
2020-11-17  8:48     ` Thomas Lamprecht

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