From: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas@proxmox.com>
To: Proxmox VE development discussion <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>
Subject: Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH pve-docs 1/3] Fix typos and wording
Date: Wed, 15 Jul 2020 17:16:37 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20200715151637.GC13999@gaia.proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20200715142606.25492-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com>
lgtm
On Wed, Jul 15, 2020 at 04:26:06PM +0200, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> Update some lines to fix spelling and grammatical errors
>
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
> certificate-management.adoc | 8 ++++----
> 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/certificate-management.adoc b/certificate-management.adoc
> index ce9081d..00633a1 100644
> --- a/certificate-management.adoc
> +++ b/certificate-management.adoc
> @@ -104,12 +104,12 @@ the {pve} cluster under your operation, are the real owner of a domain. This is
> the basis building block for automatic certificate management.
>
> The ACME protocol specifies different types of challenges, for example the
> -`http-01` where a webserver provides a file with a certain value to proof that
> +`http-01` where a webserver provides a file with a certain value to prove that
> it controls a domain. Sometimes this isn't possible, either because of
> technical limitations or if the address a domain points to is not reachable
> -from the public internet. For such cases one could use the `dns-01` challenge.
> -That challenge provides also a certain value, but not over a text file, but
> -through a DNS record on the authority name server of the domain.
> +from the public internet. For such cases, one could use the `dns-01` challenge.
> +This challenge also provides a certain value, but through a DNS record on the
> +authority name server of the domain, rather than over a text file.
>
> [thumbnail="screenshot/gui-datacenter-acme-overview.png"]
>
> --
> 2.20.1
>
>
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next prev parent reply other threads:[~2020-07-15 15:17 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 4+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2020-07-15 14:26 Dylan Whyte
2020-07-15 15:16 ` Oguz Bektas [this message]
2020-07-15 16:46 ` Thomas Lamprecht
2020-07-15 16:48 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
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