Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs v2] pveceph: document cluster shutdown

[Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>]

On Wed, 2024-05-22 at 10:33 +0200, Aaron Lauterer wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer@proxmox.com>
> ---
> changes since v1:
> * incorporated suggested changes in phrasing to fix grammar and
>   distinguish the steps on how to power down the nodes better
> 
>  pveceph.adoc | 50 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>  1 file changed, 50 insertions(+)
> 
> diff --git a/pveceph.adoc b/pveceph.adoc
> index 089ac80..04bf462 100644
> --- a/pveceph.adoc
> +++ b/pveceph.adoc
> @@ -1080,6 +1080,56 @@ scrubs footnote:[Ceph scrubbing {cephdocs-url}/rados/configuration/osd-config-re
>  are executed.
>  
>  
> +[[pveceph_shutdown]]
> +Shutdown {pve} + Ceph HCI cluster
> +~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
> +
> +To shut down the whole {pve} + Ceph cluster, first stop all Ceph clients. This
Rather s/This/These/ ?

> +will mainly be VMs and containers. If you have additional clients that might
> +access a Ceph FS or an installed RADOS GW, stop these as well.
> +Highly available guests will switch their state to 'stopped' when powered down
> +via the {pve} tooling.
> +
> +Once all clients, VMs and containers are off or not accessing the Ceph cluster
> +anymore, verify that the Ceph cluster is in a healthy state. Either via the Web UI
> +or the CLI:
> +
> +----
> +ceph -s
> +----
> +
> +Then enable the following OSD flags in the Ceph -> OSD panel or the CLI:
For style consistency: **Ceph -> OSD panel**

Maybe: s/or the CLI/or via CLI/

> +
> +----
> +ceph osd set noout
> +ceph osd set norecover
> +ceph osd set norebalance
> +ceph osd set nobackfill
> +ceph osd set nodown
> +ceph osd set pause
Maybe sort alphabetically as in the UI.

> +----
> +
> +This will halt all self-healing actions for Ceph and the 'pause' will stop any client IO.
Perhaps state the goal/result beforehand, e.g.:
Then enable the following OSD flags in the **Ceph -> OSD panel** or via CLI,
which halt all self-healing actions for Ceph and 'pause' any client IO:

> +
> +Start powering down your nodes without a monitor (MON). After these nodes are
> +down, continue shutting down hosts with monitors on them.
Since the continuation is not meant/true for "hosts with monitors":
s/continue/continue by/

Maybe: s/hosts/nodes/

> +
> +When powering on the cluster, start the nodes with Monitors (MONs) first. Once
s/Monitors/monitors/

> +all nodes are up and running, confirm that all Ceph services are up and running
> +before you unset the OSD flags:
Maybe stay with either enable/disable or set/unset.

s/flags:/flags again:/

> +
> +----
> +ceph osd unset noout
> +ceph osd unset norecover
> +ceph osd unset norebalance
> +ceph osd unset nobackfill
> +ceph osd unset nodown
> +ceph osd unset pause
Above mentioned sorting.

> +----
> +
> +You can now start up the guests. Highly available guests will change their state
> +to 'started' when they power on.
> +
>  Ceph Monitoring and Troubleshooting
>  -----------------------------------
>  



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