From: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
To: pmg-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pmg-devel] [PATCH pmg-docs 2/4] cli tools: language fixup
Date: Tue, 13 Jul 2021 17:54:04 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20210713155406.185306-2-d.whyte@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20210713155406.185306-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com>
minor rewordings and corrections in section "Command Line Tools"
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
---
nmap.adoc | 4 ++--
pmgdb.adoc | 4 ++--
pmgperf.adoc | 6 +++---
pmgqm.adoc | 2 +-
pmgsh.adoc | 2 +-
pmgupgrade.adoc | 6 +++---
pmgversion.adoc | 2 +-
7 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
diff --git a/nmap.adoc b/nmap.adoc
index 1a06b79..3747254 100644
--- a/nmap.adoc
+++ b/nmap.adoc
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
-------------------
`nmap` is designed to allow system administrators to scan large
-networks to determine which hosts are up and what services they
-offer. You can use nmap to test your firewall settings, for example
+networks, to determine which hosts are up and what services they
+offer. You can use nmap to test your firewall settings, for example,
to see if the required ports are open.
.Test Razor port (tcp port 2703):
diff --git a/pmgdb.adoc b/pmgdb.adoc
index 60f6a76..9f51aa7 100644
--- a/pmgdb.adoc
+++ b/pmgdb.adoc
@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ pmgdb - Database Management Toolkit
endif::manvolnum[]
The `pmgdb` toolkit is used to simplify common database management
-tasks. Most importantly, it is used internally to create and initialize
+tasks. It is primarily used internally to create and initialize
the default database. You can also use it to reset the filter rules
-back to factory defaults:
+to factory defaults:
----
pmgdb reset
diff --git a/pmgperf.adoc b/pmgperf.adoc
index 8cfcd8d..818d550 100644
--- a/pmgperf.adoc
+++ b/pmgperf.adoc
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ CPU BOGOMIPS:: bogomips sum of all CPUs
REGEX/SECOND:: regular expressions per second (perl performance
test), should be above 1000000.
-HD SIZE:: harddisk size
+HD SIZE:: hard disk size
BUFFERED READS:: simple HD read test. Modern HDs should reach at
least 100 MB/sec
@@ -45,14 +45,14 @@ values < 8 milliseconds. Common IDE/SATA disks get values from 15 to
20 ms. SSD seek times should be below 1ms.
FSYNCS/SECOND:: value should be greater than 200 (you should enable
-'write back' cache mode on you RAID controller - needs a battery
+'write-back' cache mode on you RAID controller - needs a battery
backed cache (BBWC)).
DNS EXT:: average time to resolve an external DNS name
DNS INT:: average time to resolve a local DNS name
-Here is an example output generated by the tool:
+Here is an example of the output generated by the tool:
----
# pmgperf
diff --git a/pmgqm.adoc b/pmgqm.adoc
index abbe023..08ad172 100644
--- a/pmgqm.adoc
+++ b/pmgqm.adoc
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ pmgqm - Quarantine Management Toolkit
:pmg-toplevel:
endif::manvolnum[]
-Toolkit to manage spam an virus quarantine, and send spam report mails.
+Toolkit to manage spam and virus quarantine, and send spam report mails.
ifdef::manvolnum[]
include::pmg-copyright.adoc[]
diff --git a/pmgsh.adoc b/pmgsh.adoc
index 0424f14..7d9ea3c 100644
--- a/pmgsh.adoc
+++ b/pmgsh.adoc
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ List entries:
# pmgsh ls /
----
-Call method 'GET' on an specific API path:
+Call the 'GET' method on a specific API path:
----
# pmgsh get /version
diff --git a/pmgupgrade.adoc b/pmgupgrade.adoc
index 03caabd..92913bb 100644
--- a/pmgupgrade.adoc
+++ b/pmgupgrade.adoc
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ pmgupgrade - Upgrade Proxmox Mail Gateway
endif::manvolnum[]
This is a small wrapper around `apt full-upgrade`. We use this to print
-additional information, like when a node reboot due to a kernel update is
-required. Additionally, it can run an interactive shell after the update, this
-is used when starting an upgrade using the web GUI.
+additional information, like when a node reboot is required, due to a kernel
+update. Additionally, it can run an interactive shell after the update. This is
+used when starting an upgrade using the web GUI.
If you are already logged in on the console, it is preferable to invoke
`apt` directly.
diff --git a/pmgversion.adoc b/pmgversion.adoc
index 9f86e7f..62cad69 100644
--- a/pmgversion.adoc
+++ b/pmgversion.adoc
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ List version details for important packages:
# pmgversion -v
----
-Please use the Debian package management for details about other packages
+Please use the Debian package manager for details about other packages:
----
# dpkg -l
--
2.30.2
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2021-07-13 15:55 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2021-07-13 15:54 [pmg-devel] [PATCH pmg-docs 1/4] service daemons: " Dylan Whyte
2021-07-13 15:54 ` Dylan Whyte [this message]
2021-07-13 15:54 ` [pmg-devel] [PATCH pmg-docs 3/4] faq: " Dylan Whyte
2021-07-13 15:54 ` [pmg-devel] [PATCH pmg-docs 4/4] certificate management: langauge fixup Dylan Whyte
2021-07-13 16:41 ` [pmg-devel] applied-series: [PATCH pmg-docs 1/4] service daemons: language fixup Stoiko Ivanov
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