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From: Shannon Sterz <s.sterz@proxmox.com>
To: pdm-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pdm-devel] [PATCH datacenter-manager 1/3] docs: adjust to trademark policies and fix a typo
Date: Tue,  2 Dec 2025 18:04:53 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20251202170456.504893-2-s.sterz@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20251202170456.504893-1-s.sterz@proxmox.com>

- "Rust programming language" instead of just "Rust"
- remove "PBS" and "PVE" abbreviations from the introduction (don't
emphasize wrong usage of "Proxmox" brand, later on in a technical
documentation PVE and PBS are fine)
- don't mention standard subscription level twice

Signed-off-by: Shannon Sterz <s.sterz@proxmox.com>
---
 README.md             | 2 +-
 docs/introduction.rst | 8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index a8030cf..61e7c74 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ VE and Proxmox Backup Server in one central place.
 ## Technology Overview
 
 ### Backend
-- Implemented in Rust, reusing code from Proxmox Backup Server where possible
+- Implemented in the Rust programming language, reusing code from Proxmox Backup Server where possible
 - A for Proxmox projects standard dual-stack of API daemons. One as main API daemon running as
   unprivileged users and one privileged daemon running as root. Contrary to other projects the
   privileged daemon exclusively listens on a file based UNIX socket, thus restricting attack surface
diff --git a/docs/introduction.rst b/docs/introduction.rst
index e736702..5435d82 100644
--- a/docs/introduction.rst
+++ b/docs/introduction.rst
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ What is Proxmox Datacenter Manager?
 -----------------------------------
 
 Proxmox Datacenter Manager is a centralized management platform designed to oversee Proxmox Virtual
-Environment (PVE) and Proxmox Backup Server (PBS) instances across disjointed locations.
+Environment and Proxmox Backup Server instances across disjointed locations.
 It provides a unified view of all registered resources, including nodes, virtual machines,
 containers, storages, and backup datastores, regardless of their geographic location.
 
@@ -47,8 +47,8 @@ Technology Stack
 
 Proxmox Datacenter Manager relies on a modern, secure, and performant technology stack:
 
-* **Core Language**: The project is primarily developed in **Rust**, ensuring memory safety and
-  high performance.
+* **Core Language**: The project is primarily developed in the **Rust** programming Language,
+  ensuring memory safety and high performance.
 * **Backend Architecture**:
 
  * The backend exposes a JSON-based REST API.
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ Getting Help
 Enterprise Support
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
-Customers with an active Basic, Standard, Premium, or Standard subscription for
+Customers with an active Basic, Standard, or Premium subscription for
 their Proxmox remotes gain access to the Proxmox Datacenter Manager Enterprise
 Repository and technical support.
 
-- 
2.47.3



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  reply	other threads:[~2025-12-02 17:04 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2025-12-02 17:04 [pdm-devel] [PATCH datacenter-manager 0/3] add release history and improve docs according to brand guidelines Shannon Sterz
2025-12-02 17:04 ` Shannon Sterz [this message]
2025-12-02 17:04 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH datacenter-manager 2/3] docs: add release history up to v1.0 Shannon Sterz
2025-12-02 17:04 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH datacenter-manager 3/3] docs: indent alpha and bet releases below the v1 release Shannon Sterz
2025-12-02 18:49 ` [pdm-devel] applied: [PATCH datacenter-manager 0/3] add release history and improve docs according to brand guidelines Thomas Lamprecht

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