From: Dietmar Maurer <dietmar@proxmox.com>
To: Proxmox Backup Server development discussion
<pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com>, Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
Subject: Re: [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 1/2] docs: language and formatting fixup
Date: Fri, 8 Oct 2021 06:59:54 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <b0cf0835-e3e6-c1dc-4277-b03cdc0d8a64@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20211006151957.437820-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com>
some questions below:
On 10/6/21 5:19 PM, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> --- a/docs/installation.rst
> +++ b/docs/installation.rst
> @@ -19,24 +19,24 @@ for various management tasks such as disk management.
> `Proxmox Backup`_ without the server part.
We use `Proxmox Backup`_ here (which is defined in epilog.rst)
> The disk image (ISO file) provided by Proxmox includes a complete Debian system
> -as well as all necessary packages for the `Proxmox Backup`_ server.
> +as well as all necessary packages for the `Proxmox Backup Server`_.
>
> The installer will guide you through the setup process and allow
> -you to partition the local disk(s), apply basic system configurations
> -(e.g. timezone, language, network), and install all required packages.
> +you to partition the local disk(s), apply basic system configuration
> +(for example timezone, language, network), and install all required packages.
> The provided ISO will get you started in just a few minutes, and is the
> recommended method for new and existing users.
>
> -Alternatively, `Proxmox Backup`_ server can be installed on top of an
> +Alternatively, `Proxmox Backup Server`_ can be installed on top of an
So why do you change that here? Where is `Proxmox Backup Server`_ defined?
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2021-10-08 5:00 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 4+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2021-10-06 15:19 Dylan Whyte
2021-10-06 15:19 ` [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 2/2] docs: Update for new features/functionality Dylan Whyte
2021-10-08 4:59 ` Dietmar Maurer [this message]
2021-10-08 7:42 ` [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 1/2] docs: language and formatting fixup Dylan Whyte
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