From: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
To: Dietmar Maurer <dietmar@proxmox.com>,
Proxmox Backup Server development discussion
<pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com>
Subject: Re: [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 1/2] docs: language and formatting fixup
Date: Fri, 8 Oct 2021 09:42:11 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <56f10636-1a8b-2e20-66b5-94b0d26aba0f@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <b0cf0835-e3e6-c1dc-4277-b03cdc0d8a64@proxmox.com>
On 10/8/21 6:59 AM, Dietmar Maurer wrote:
> some questions below:
>
> On 10/6/21 5:19 PM, Dylan Whyte wrote:
>> --- a/docs/installation.rst
>> +++ b/docs/installation.rst
>> @@ -19,24 +19,24 @@ for various management tasks such as disk
>> management.
>> `Proxmox Backup`_ without the server part.
>
> We use `Proxmox Backup`_ here (which is defined in epilog.rst)
>
>> The disk image (ISO file) provided by Proxmox includes a complete
>> Debian system
>> -as well as all necessary packages for the `Proxmox Backup`_ server.
>> +as well as all necessary packages for the `Proxmox Backup Server`_.
>> The installer will guide you through the setup process and allow
>> -you to partition the local disk(s), apply basic system configurations
>> -(e.g. timezone, language, network), and install all required packages.
>> +you to partition the local disk(s), apply basic system configuration
>> +(for example timezone, language, network), and install all required
>> packages.
>> The provided ISO will get you started in just a few minutes, and is
>> the
>> recommended method for new and existing users.
>> -Alternatively, `Proxmox Backup`_ server can be installed on top of an
>> +Alternatively, `Proxmox Backup Server`_ can be installed on top of an
>
> So why do you change that here? Where is `Proxmox Backup Server`_
> defined?
Ah that's my bad. I update the epilog.rst as I thought it made more
sense to have the hyperlink cover the full name of the product, but i
forgot to include it with the patch..
Will fix it in a v2.
>
>
Dylan
prev parent reply other threads:[~2021-10-08 7:42 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 4+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2021-10-06 15:19 Dylan Whyte
2021-10-06 15:19 ` [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 2/2] docs: Update for new features/functionality Dylan Whyte
2021-10-08 4:59 ` [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 1/2] docs: language and formatting fixup Dietmar Maurer
2021-10-08 7:42 ` Dylan Whyte [this message]
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