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From: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
To: Proxmox Backup Server development discussion
	<pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com>,
	Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
Subject: [pbs-devel] applied: [PATCH v2 proxmox-backup] docs: installation: several small fixes/improvements
Date: Wed, 27 Nov 2024 12:57:11 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <4fadf03d-8f6a-40de-b230-d3fdc1e108c4@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20241127104958.3-1-a.zeidler@proxmox.com>

Am 27.11.24 um 11:49 schrieb Alexander Zeidler:
> * consistently use "medium" (singular), as only one is needed for
>   installation (installation-media.rst not renamed)
> * add short introduction to recently added chapter "Installation Media"
> * update minimum required flash drive storage space to 2 GB
> * remove CD-ROM (too little storage space) but keep DVD
> * mention explicitly that data get overwritten on installation media /
>   installation target disks
> * mention that using `dd` will require root privileges
> * add accidentally cut off text when copying from PVE docs
> * add reference labels to currently needed section titles
> * reword some paragraphs for completeness and readability
> * mention all installation methods in the intro of "Server Installation"
> * add the boot order as possible boot issue
> * remove recently added redundant product website hyperlinks (as earlier
>   with commit 34407477e2)
> * fix broken heading level of APT-based PBC repo
> 
> * slightly reorder sub-chapters of "Installation":
> 
> After adding the chapter "Installation Media" (d363818641), the chapter
> order under "Installation" is:
> 
> 1. System Requirements
> 2. Installation Media
> 3. Debian Package Repositories
> 4. Server Installation
> 5. Client Installation
> 
> But repos are more likely to be configured after installation, and for
> other installation methods chapter links exist anyway. So to keep the
> chapter order more logical, "Debian Package Repositories" is now moved
> after "Client Installation".
> 
> Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
> ---
> v2:
>  * implement all suggestions from Shannon
> 
> 
>  docs/installation-media.rst   | 57 +++++++++++++++++++++--------------
>  docs/installation.rst         | 41 +++++++++++++++++--------
>  docs/package-repositories.rst |  2 +-
>  docs/using-the-installer.rst  | 25 +++++++--------
>  4 files changed, 76 insertions(+), 49 deletions(-)
> 
>

applied, thanks!


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2024-11-27 10:49 [pbs-devel] " Alexander Zeidler
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