From: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
To: pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 4/6] docs: pbs2to3: fix and improve wording
Date: Fri, 24 Nov 2023 18:43:45 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20231124174347.200266-4-a.zeidler@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20231124174347.200266-1-a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
---
docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst | 8 ++++----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst b/docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst
index d6a14b91..f729c6d9 100644
--- a/docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst
+++ b/docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ pbs2to3
Description
===========
-This tool will help you to detect common pitfalls and misconfguration before,
-and during the upgrade of a Proxmox VE system Any failure must be addressed
-before the upgrade, and any waring must be addressed, or at least carefully
-evaluated, if a false-positive is suspected
+This tool will help you to detect common pitfalls and misconfiguration before,
+and during the upgrade of a Proxmox Backup Server system. Any failures or
+warnings must be addressed prior to the upgrade. If you suspect that a message
+is a false positive, you have to make carefully sure that it really is.
.. include:: ../pbs-copyright.rst
--
2.39.2
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2023-11-24 17:44 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 7+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2023-11-24 17:43 [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 1/6] docs: add "Wiki" to sidebar Alexander Zeidler
2023-11-24 17:43 ` [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 2/6] docs: improve the occurrence of product website hyperlinks Alexander Zeidler
2023-11-24 17:43 ` [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 3/6] docs: epilog: update hyperlinks Alexander Zeidler
2023-11-24 17:43 ` Alexander Zeidler [this message]
2023-11-24 17:43 ` [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 5/6] docs: fix typos Alexander Zeidler
2023-11-24 17:43 ` [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 6/6] docs: replace path list with table for better readability Alexander Zeidler
2023-11-25 15:23 ` [pbs-devel] applied: [PATCH proxmox-backup 1/6] docs: add "Wiki" to sidebar Thomas Lamprecht
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