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* [pbs-devel] [PATCH pve-installer] PBS installer: Language fixup
@ 2020-11-09 12:11 Dylan Whyte
  2020-11-09 12:35 ` [pbs-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 2+ messages in thread
From: Dylan Whyte @ 2020-11-09 12:11 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: pbs-devel

- Correct spelling and grammar
- Minor rewordings for readability

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
---
 html-common/ack_template.htm     |  4 ++--
 html-common/country.htm          | 10 +++++-----
 html-common/ipconf.htm           |  6 +++---
 html-common/success.htm          |  2 +-
 html-pbs/extract1-license.htm    |  4 ++--
 html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm | 14 ++++++++++----
 html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm       |  8 ++++----
 html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm      |  2 +-
 html-pbs/page1.htm               |  6 +++---
 html-pbs/passwd.htm              | 10 +++++-----
 10 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)

diff --git a/html-common/ack_template.htm b/html-common/ack_template.htm
index e3e2775..48d7213 100644
--- a/html-common/ack_template.htm
+++ b/html-common/ack_template.htm
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
     <table>
       <tbody>
       <tr><td>
-        <b>Please verify</b> the displayed informations.
+        <b>Please confirm</b> the displayed information.
         Once you press the <b>Install</b> button, the installer will begin to partition your drive(s) and extract the required files.
       </td></tr>
     </tbody></table>
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
 
       <tr><td>Keymap:</td> <td>__keymap__</td></tr>
 
-      <tr><td>E-Mail:</td> <td>__mailto__</td></tr>
+      <tr><td>Email:</td> <td>__mailto__</td></tr>
 
       <tr><td>Management Interface:</td> <td>__interface__</td></tr>
 
diff --git a/html-common/country.htm b/html-common/country.htm
index 6503afb..990a39f 100644
--- a/html-common/country.htm
+++ b/html-common/country.htm
@@ -16,11 +16,11 @@
     <td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p>
     <table>
       <tr><td><b>The Proxmox Installer</b>
-	automatically makes location based optimizations, like
-	choosing the nearest mirror to download files. Also make sure
-	to select the right time zone and keyboard layout.
+	automatically makes location-based optimizations, like
+	choosing the nearest mirror to download files from. Also make sure
+	to select the correct time zone and keyboard layout.
 	<br><br>
-	Press the Next button to continue installation.
+	Press the Next button to continue the installation.
       </td></tr>
     </table>
   </p></td>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 	<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
 	<td valign="top"><b>Country:</b>
 	  The selected country is used to choose nearby mirror
-	  servers. This will speedup downloads and make updates more
+	  servers. This will speed up downloads and make updates more
 	  reliable.
 	  <br><br>
 	</td>
diff --git a/html-common/ipconf.htm b/html-common/ipconf.htm
index fb46510..ed3fd9d 100644
--- a/html-common/ipconf.htm
+++ b/html-common/ipconf.htm
@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@
       <tbody>
         <tr><td><b>Please verify</b> the displayed network configuration. You
         will need a valid network configuration to access the management
-        interface after installation.<br><br>
-        Afterwards press the Next button. You will be shown a list of the
-        options that you chose during the previous steps.
+        interface after installing.<br><br>
+        After you have finished, press the Next button. You will be shown a
+        list of the options that you chose during the previous steps.
         </td></tr>
       </tbody>
     </table>
diff --git a/html-common/success.htm b/html-common/success.htm
index a6884b3..218ecff 100644
--- a/html-common/success.htm
+++ b/html-common/success.htm
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
     <p>
     <b class="htext">Installation successful!</b>
     <br><br><br>
-    The __FULL_PRODUCT_NAME__ is now installed and ready to use.
+    __FULL_PRODUCT_NAME__ is now installed and ready to use.
     <br><br><br>
     <table border="0" width="500">
       <tbody><tr>
diff --git a/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm b/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm
index df77fa8..9ceae4f 100644
--- a/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
         - Easy management<br>
 
         For more information, visit <b>www.proxmox.com</b>
-        or the project page about Proxmox Backup Server.
+        or the Proxmox Backup Server project page.
         <br><br>
       </td></tr>
     </table>
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
         <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
         <td valign="top">
           <b>Graphical User Interface</b><br>
-          Easily manage your data backups with the integrated web interface .<br><br>
+          Easily manage your backups with the integrated web interface.<br><br>
         </td>
       </tr>
       <tr>
diff --git a/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm b/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm
index 7f80d75..bede21f 100644
--- a/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm
@@ -16,8 +16,12 @@
   <td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p>
     <table>
       <tr><td>
-        Proxmox Backup Server is production-ready and saves you money by reducing the amount of data stored.<br><br>The role based permission management combined with the integration of multiple external authentication sources is the base for a secure and stable environment.<br><br>
-        Visit <b>www.proxmox.com</b> for more information about commercial support subscriptions.<br><br>
+        Proxmox Backup Server is production-ready and saves you money, by
+        reducing the amount of data stored.<br><br>The role-based permission
+        management, combined with the integration of multiple external
+        authentication sources provides the basis for a secure and stable
+        environment.<br><br>
+        Visit <b>www.proxmox.com</b> for more information regarding commercial support subscriptions.<br><br>
       </td></tr>
     </table>
   </p></td>
@@ -36,7 +40,9 @@
           <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
           <td valign="top">
             <b>RESTful web API</b><br>
-            Resource-oriented architecture (ROA) and declarative API definition using JSON Schema enable easy integration for third party management tools.
+            The resource-oriented architecture (ROA) and declarative API definition
+            using JSON Schema enable easy integration for third party
+            management tools.
           </td>
         </tr>
         <tr></tr>
@@ -44,7 +50,7 @@
           <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
           <td valign="top">
             <b>Encryption</b><br>
-            To help protect against cyber attacks, encryption of your backups is done on the client-side using AES-256 in GCM mode.
+            To help protect against cyber attacks, encryption of your backups is done on the client-side, using AES-256 in GCM mode.
           </td>
         </tr>
         <tr></tr>
diff --git a/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm b/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm
index ce606b7..4dd1f09 100644
--- a/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
   <td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p>
     <table>
       <tr><td>
-        With the Proxmox Backup Server you can safely backup and restore your business critical data.<br>
+        With the Proxmox Backup Server, you can safely backup and restore your business critical data.<br>
       </td></tr>
     </table>
   </p></td>
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
           <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
           <td valign="top">
             <b>Support for Proxmox VE</b><br>
-            The Proxmox Virtual Environment is fully supported and the seamless integration
-            allows you to easily backup VMs and container.<br>
+            The Proxmox Virtual Environment is fully supported, and the seamless integration
+            allows you to easily backup VMs and containers.<br>
           </td>
         </tr>
         <tr></tr>
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
           <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
           <td valign="top">
             <b>Web Console</b><br>
-            SSL secured browser-integrated console view to all datastores.<br>
+            SSL-secured, browser-integrated system console.<br>
           </td>
         </tr>
         <tr></tr>
diff --git a/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm b/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm
index 28efbe4..74069ec 100644
--- a/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
     <table>
       <tr><td>
         <b>Data Integrity</b><br>
-        The built in SHA-256 checksum algorithm assures the accuracy and consistency of your backups.<br><br>
+        The built in SHA-256 checksum algorithm ensures the accuracy and consistency of your backups.<br><br>
       </td></tr>
       <tr><td>
         <b>Compression</b><br>
diff --git a/html-pbs/page1.htm b/html-pbs/page1.htm
index 99b9c7e..debfdf1 100644
--- a/html-pbs/page1.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/page1.htm
@@ -17,10 +17,10 @@
     <table>
       <tbody><tr><td><b>The Proxmox Installer</b>
         automatically partitions your hard disk. It installs all required
-        packages and finally makes the system bootable from hard disk.
+        packages and makes the system bootable from the hard disk.
         All existing partitions and data will be lost.
         <br><br>
-        To continue installation, press the Next button.
+        To continue the installation, press the Next button.
       </td></tr>
     </tbody></table>
   </p></td>
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
         <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
         <td valign="top" width="560"><b>Graphical user interface</b><br>
           Final configuration will be done on the graphical user
-          interface via a web browser.
+          interface, via a web browser.
           <br><br>
         </td>
       </tr>
diff --git a/html-pbs/passwd.htm b/html-pbs/passwd.htm
index 07f0d77..d331b28 100644
--- a/html-pbs/passwd.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/passwd.htm
@@ -9,14 +9,14 @@
 <tr><td>&nbsp;</td></tr>
 <tr>
   <td colspan="4" align="center" width="800">
-    <b class="htext">Administration Password and E-Mail Address</b>
+    <b class="htext">Administration Password and Email Address</b>
   </td>
 </tr>
 <tr>
     <td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p>
     <table>
       <tr><td><b>Proxmox Backup Server</b> is a
-        full-featured, highly secure system based on Debian GNU/Linux.
+        full-featured, highly secure system, based on Debian GNU/Linux.
         <br><br>
         In this step, please provide the <i>root</i> password.
       </td></tr>
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
       <tr>
         <td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
         <td valign="top"><b>Password:</b>
-          Please use a strong password. It should have 8 or more characters.
-          Also combine letters, numbers, and symbols.
+          Please use a strong password. It should be at least 8 characters long,
+          and contain a combination of letters, numbers, and symbols.
           <br><br>
         </td>
       </tr>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
       </tr>
       <tr>
         <td valign="top" width="30"></td>
-        <td valign="top">To continue installation, press the Next button.</td>
+        <td valign="top">To continue the installation, press the Next button.</td>
       </tr>
     </table>
   </p></td>
-- 
2.20.1





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* [pbs-devel] applied: [PATCH pve-installer] PBS installer: Language fixup
  2020-11-09 12:11 [pbs-devel] [PATCH pve-installer] PBS installer: Language fixup Dylan Whyte
@ 2020-11-09 12:35 ` Thomas Lamprecht
  0 siblings, 0 replies; 2+ messages in thread
From: Thomas Lamprecht @ 2020-11-09 12:35 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Proxmox Backup Server development discussion, Dylan Whyte

On 09.11.20 13:11, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> - Correct spelling and grammar
> - Minor rewordings for readability
> 
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
>  html-common/ack_template.htm     |  4 ++--
>  html-common/country.htm          | 10 +++++-----
>  html-common/ipconf.htm           |  6 +++---
>  html-common/success.htm          |  2 +-
>  html-pbs/extract1-license.htm    |  4 ++--
>  html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm | 14 ++++++++++----
>  html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm       |  8 ++++----
>  html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm      |  2 +-
>  html-pbs/page1.htm               |  6 +++---
>  html-pbs/passwd.htm              | 10 +++++-----
>  10 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)
> 
>

applied, thanks!




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