From: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
To: pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pbs-devel] [PATCH pbs-docs 2/2] docs: introduction: rewording and fixing of minor errors
Date: Fri, 17 Jul 2020 16:25:04 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20200717142504.6186-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com> (raw)
Reworded one sentence for improved readability.
Fixed some minor language errors.
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
---
docs/introduction.rst | 20 ++++++++++----------
1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/introduction.rst b/docs/introduction.rst
index a7935fd9..cca8109b 100644
--- a/docs/introduction.rst
+++ b/docs/introduction.rst
@@ -4,17 +4,17 @@ Introduction
What is Proxmox Backup Server
-----------------------------
-Proxmox Backup Server is an enterprise-class client-server backup software that
-backups :term:`virtual machine`\ s, :term:`container`\ s, and physical hosts.
-It is specially optimized for the `Proxmox Virtual Environment`_ platform and
-allows you to backup your data securely, even between remote sites, providing
-easy management with a web-based user interface.
+Proxmox Backup Server is an enterprise-class, client-server backup software
+package that backs up :term:`virtual machine`\ s, :term:`container`\ s, and
+physical hosts. It is specially optimized for the `Proxmox Virtual Environment`_
+platform and allows you to back up your data securely, even between remote
+sites, providing easy management with a web-based user interface.
Proxmox Backup Server supports deduplication, compression, and authenticated
-encryption (AE_). Using :term:`Rust` as implementation language guarantees high
-performance, low resource usage, and a safe, high quality code base.
+encryption (AE_). Using :term:`Rust` as the implementation language guarantees high
+performance, low resource usage, and a safe, high-quality codebase.
-It features strong encryption done on the client side. Thus, it's possible to
+It features strong client-side encryption. Thus, it's possible to
backup data to not fully trusted targets.
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ Main Features
several gigabytes of data per second.
:Encryption: Backups can be encrypted on the client-side using AES-256 in
- Galois/Counter Mode (GCM_) mode. This authenticated encryption (AE_) mde
+ Galois/Counter Mode (GCM_) mode. This authenticated encryption (AE_) mode
provides very high performance on modern hardware.
:Web interface: Manage the Proxmox Backup Server with the integrated web-based
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ Proxmox Backup Server consists of multiple components:
* client CLI tool (`proxmox-backup-client`) to access the server easily from
any `Linux amd64` environment.
-Everything besides the web interface are written in the Rust programming
+Everything outside of the web interface is written in the Rust programming
language.
"The Rust programming language helps you write faster, more reliable software.
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