From: "Gabriel Goller" <g.goller@proxmox.com>
To: "Proxmox VE development discussion" <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>
Subject: Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 5/9] package-repos: align wording with pmg-docs
Date: Tue, 05 Mar 2024 09:28:21 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <CZLOARRFTJ6Y.3QXPKE3WCIBE2@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240304132221.901327-6-c.heiss@proxmox.com>
On Mon Mar 4, 2024 at 2:22 PM CET, Christoph Heiss wrote:
> The `root@pam` user is notified via email about available updates. Click the
> 'Changelog' button in the GUI to see more details about the selected update.
>
> -You need a valid subscription key to access the `pve-enterprise` repository.
> -Different support levels are available. Further details can be found at
> -{pricing-url}.
> +As soon as updates are available, the `root@pam` user is notified via email
> +about the newly available packages. From the GUI, the 'Changelog' button in the
> +GUI can be used to see more details about the selected update.
> +Thus, you will never miss important security fixes.
The section about the 'Changelog' button is duplicated, it is already in
the paragraph above.
Also `GUI` appears twice in the same sentence, I would propose something
like this (if we use the second sentence):
The 'Changelog' button in the GUI can be used to see more
details about the selected update.
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2024-03-05 8:28 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 18+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2024-03-04 13:22 [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 0/9] improve & unify installation(-related) documentation Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 1/9] gitignore: add package build outputs Christoph Heiss
2024-03-06 17:16 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 2/9] asciidoc: introduce `pricing-url` variable, much like pmg-docs Christoph Heiss
2024-03-06 17:16 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 3/9] local-btrfs: unify casing for btrfs Christoph Heiss
2024-03-06 17:19 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 4/9] getting-help: forum: align wording with pmg-docs Christoph Heiss
2024-03-06 17:19 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 5/9] package-repos: " Christoph Heiss
2024-03-05 8:28 ` Gabriel Goller [this message]
2024-03-05 12:00 ` Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 6/9] installation: iso: improve & " Christoph Heiss
2024-03-05 8:38 ` Gabriel Goller
2024-03-05 12:05 ` Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 7/9] installation: lvm-options: " Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 8/9] installation: zfs-options: " Christoph Heiss
2024-03-04 13:22 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 9/9] installation: iso: reflow location and password dialog screenshots Christoph Heiss
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