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From: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
To: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>, pmg-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: Re: [pmg-devel] [PATCH pmg-docs 1/3] replace "e-mail" with "email"
Date: Thu, 27 May 2021 07:45:07 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <90953f7d-6aef-9f40-5928-8813b23ce6ac@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20210526140851.11670-1-d.whyte@proxmox.com>

On 26.05.21 16:08, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> in accordance with our technical writing guide

applied, thanks, but..

> diff --git a/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc b/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc
> index 0b1c5dd..6d1ab9f 100644
> --- a/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc
> +++ b/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc
> @@ -2,53 +2,53 @@
>  Planning for Deployment
>  =======================
>  
> -Easy integration into existing e-mail server architecture
> +Easy integration into existing email server architecture
>  ---------------------------------------------------------


.. heading line needs to be adapted to match in length too, else there may
be some (subtle) breakage in rendering/anchoring

>  
> -In this sample configuration, your e-mail traffic (SMTP) arrives on
> -the firewall and will be directly forwarded to your e-mail server.
> +In this sample configuration, your email traffic (SMTP) arrives on
> +the firewall and will be directly forwarded to your email server.
>  
>  image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_without_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[]
>  
> -By using the {pmg}, all your e-mail traffic is forwarded to the
> -Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the e-mail traffic and
> -removes unwanted e-mails. You can manage incoming and outgoing mail
> +By using the {pmg}, all your email traffic is forwarded to the
> +Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the email traffic and
> +removes unwanted emails. You can manage incoming and outgoing mail
>  traffic.
>  
>  image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_with_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[]
>  
>  
> -Filtering outgoing e-mails
> +Filtering outgoing emails
>  --------------------------

here too.

I fixed those above, and the others introduced, in a followup commit.




      parent reply	other threads:[~2021-05-27  5:45 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 4+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2021-05-26 14:08 Dylan Whyte
2021-05-26 14:08 ` [pmg-devel] [PATCH pmg-docs 2/3] introduction language fix-up Dylan Whyte
2021-05-26 14:08 ` [pmg-devel] [PATCH pmg-docs 3/3] planning deployment - " Dylan Whyte
2021-05-27  5:45 ` Thomas Lamprecht [this message]

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