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From: Stefan Hanreich <s.hanreich@proxmox.com>
To: Shannon Sterz <s.sterz@proxmox.com>,
	Proxmox Datacenter Manager development discussion
	<pdm-devel@lists.proxmox.com>
Subject: Re: [pdm-devel] [PATCH pve-network v3 6/6] api: zones: update schema of endpoints
Date: Wed, 3 Sep 2025 15:04:37 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <7d10f2fd-0dc7-42b4-ba0b-90cdbde2535e@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <DCJ2BCMYU438.3NGQUQWK0B6YX@proxmox.com>

thanks I'll make the changes to the descriptions, some comments
regarding vxlan-port


On 9/3/25 11:36 AM, Shannon Sterz wrote:
> small comments in-line
> 
> On Tue Sep 2, 2025 at 4:09 PM CEST, Stefan Hanreich wrote:
>> The possible properties returned by the zone endpoints were only
>> partly documented. Add all missing properties and improve descriptions
>> for existing properties.
>>
>> Extract all duplicate properties into a separate variable, so we
>> don't have to rewrite the whole API definition for every endpoint.
>>
>> Signed-off-by: Stefan Hanreich <s.hanreich@proxmox.com>
>> ---
>>  src/PVE/API2/Network/SDN/Zones.pm        | 203 +++++++++++++++++++++--
>>  src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/EvpnPlugin.pm  |  22 ++-
>>  src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/QinQPlugin.pm  |   6 +-
>>  src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/VlanPlugin.pm  |   1 +
>>  src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/VxlanPlugin.pm |  15 +-
>>  5 files changed, 218 insertions(+), 29 deletions(-)
>>
> 
> -->8 snip 8<--
> 
>> +    'vxlan-port' => {
>> +        description =>
>> +            "UDP port that should be used for the VXLAN tunnel (default 4789). VXLAN zone only.",
> 
> wouldn't it make sense to define a `default` property here then? so:
> 
>     default => 4789,

bit of a weird one, since the default is 4789 for VXLAN zones only,
otherwise it is null. Also, the default for the section config is
technically null as well, since we rely on the fact that not specifying
a port defaults to 4789 in ifupdown2 (fun fact: in the kernel its 8472).

anyway, from a practical standpoint this makes sense imo and its
informational only, so no harm in adding it here.

> 
> -->8 snip 8<--
> 
>>          'rt-import' => {
>>              type => 'string',
>> -            description => "Route-Target import",
>> +            description =>
>> +                'List of Route Targets that should be imported into the VRF of the zone',
> 
> nit: you added a period to all other descriptions here, so end this
> sentence with one too?
> 
>>              optional => 1,
>>              format => 'pve-sdn-bgp-rt-list',
>>          },
>> diff --git a/src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/QinQPlugin.pm b/src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/QinQPlugin.pm
>> index 5806e69..3c72d35 100644
>> --- a/src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/QinQPlugin.pm
>> +++ b/src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/QinQPlugin.pm
>> @@ -18,11 +18,11 @@ sub properties {
>>          tag => {
>>              type => 'integer',
>>              minimum => 0,
>> -            description => "Service-VLAN Tag",
>> +            description => "Service-VLAN Tag (outer VLAN)",
>>          },
> 
> since this is so short, i think it's probably fine to leave that without
> a period here.
> 
>>          mtu => {
>>              type => 'integer',
>> -            description => "MTU",
>> +            description => "MTU of the zone, will be used for the created VNet bridges.",
>>              optional => 1,
>>          },
>>          'vlan-protocol' => {
>> @@ -30,6 +30,8 @@ sub properties {
>>              enum => ['802.1q', '802.1ad'],
>>              default => '802.1q',
>>              optional => 1,
>> +            description =>
>> +                "Which VLAN protocol should be used for the creation of the QinQ zone",
> 
> nit: add a period here too?
> 
>>          },
>>      };
>>  }
>> diff --git a/src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/VlanPlugin.pm b/src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/VlanPlugin.pm
>> index 90f16bf..9d6932f 100644
>> --- a/src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/VlanPlugin.pm
>> +++ b/src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/VlanPlugin.pm
>> @@ -27,6 +27,7 @@ sub properties {
>>      return {
>>          'bridge' => {
>>              type => 'string',
>> +            description => 'the bridge for which VLANs should be managed',
> 
> nit: capitalize beginning of sentence and end it in a period?
> 
>>          },
>>          'bridge-disable-mac-learning' => {
>>              type => 'boolean',
>> diff --git a/src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/VxlanPlugin.pm b/src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/VxlanPlugin.pm
>> index 8f6fba0..7ab89da 100644
>> --- a/src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/VxlanPlugin.pm
>> +++ b/src/PVE/Network/SDN/Zones/VxlanPlugin.pm
>> @@ -27,21 +27,22 @@ sub type {
>>  sub properties {
>>      return {
>>          'peers' => {
>> -            description => "peers address list.",
>> +            description =>
>> +                "Comma-separated list of peers, that are part of the VXLAN zone. Usually the IPs of the nodes.",
>>              type => 'string',
>>              format => 'ip-list',
>>          },
>> -        fabric => {
>> -            description => "SDN fabric to use as underlay for this VXLAN zone.",
>> -            type => 'string',
>> -            format => 'pve-sdn-fabric-id',
>> -        },
>>          'vxlan-port' => {
>> -            description => "Vxlan tunnel udp port (default 4789).",
>> +            description => "UDP port that should be used for the VXLAN tunnel (default 4789).",
>>              minimum => 1,
>>              maximum => 65536,
> 
> could also define the default here too?

here it definitely would make sense, since it's non-optional.

> 
>>              type => 'integer',
>>          },
>> +        fabric => {
>> +            description => "SDN fabric to use as underlay for this VXLAN zone.",
>> +            type => 'string',
>> +            format => 'pve-sdn-fabric-id',
>> +        },
>>      };
>>  }
>>
> 



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  reply	other threads:[~2025-09-03 13:04 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 41+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2025-09-02 14:09 [pdm-devel] [PATCH network/proxmox{, -backup, -api-types, -datacenter-manager} v3 00/30] Add initial SDN / EVPN integration Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox v3 1/2] schema: use i64 for minimum / maximum / default integer values Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox v3 2/2] pbs-api-types: fix values for integer schemas Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup v3 1/1] api: change integer schema parameters to i64 Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH pve-network v3 1/6] sdn: api: return null for rollback / lock endpoints Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH pve-network v3 2/6] controllers: fix maximum value for ASN Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH pve-network v3 3/6] api: add state standard option Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH pve-network v3 4/6] api: controllers: update schema of endpoints Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH pve-network v3 5/6] api: vnets: " Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH pve-network v3 6/6] api: zones: " Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-03  9:37   ` Shannon Sterz
2025-09-03 13:04     ` Stefan Hanreich [this message]
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-api-types v3 1/6] sdn: add list/create zone endpoints Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-03  9:36   ` Shannon Sterz
2025-09-03 13:15     ` Wolfgang Bumiller
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-api-types v3 2/6] sdn: add list/create vnet endpoints Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-03  9:36   ` Shannon Sterz
2025-09-03 12:07     ` Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-03 13:16       ` Wolfgang Bumiller
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-api-types v3 3/6] sdn: add list/create controller endpoints Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-api-types v3 4/6] sdn: add sdn configuration locking endpoints Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-api-types v3 5/6] tasks: add helper for querying successfully finished tasks Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-api-types v3 6/6] sdn: add helpers for pending values Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 01/15] server: add locked sdn client helpers Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-03  9:37   ` Shannon Sterz
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 02/15] ui: pve: sdn: add descriptions for sdn tasks Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 03/15] api: sdn: add list_zones endpoint Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 04/15] api: sdn: add create_zone endpoint Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 05/15] api: sdn: add list_vnets endpoint Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 06/15] api: sdn: add create_vnet endpoint Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 07/15] api: sdn: add list_controllers endpoint Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 08/15] ui: sdn: add EvpnRouteTarget type Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 09/15] ui: sdn: add vnet icon Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 10/15] ui: sdn: add view for showing evpn zones Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 11/15] ui: sdn: add view for showing ip vrfs Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 12/15] ui: sdn: add component for creating evpn vnets Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 13/15] ui: sdn: add component for creatin evpn zones Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 14/15] ui: sdn: add evpn overview panel Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:09 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH proxmox-datacenter-manager v3 15/15] ui: sdn: add evpn panel to main menu Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-02 14:13 ` [pdm-devel] [PATCH network/proxmox{, -backup, -api-types, -datacenter-manager} v3 00/30] Add initial SDN / EVPN integration Stefan Hanreich
2025-09-03 16:38 ` [pdm-devel] superseded: " Stefan Hanreich

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