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From: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH manager] pve7to8: fix and improve wording
Date: Fri,  1 Dec 2023 14:55:08 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20231201135508.95895-1-a.zeidler@proxmox.com> (raw)

Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
---
 bin/Makefile | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/bin/Makefile b/bin/Makefile
index 06d8148e..2185b009 100644
--- a/bin/Makefile
+++ b/bin/Makefile
@@ -62,10 +62,11 @@ pve6to7.1:
 
 pve7to8.1:
 	printf ".TH PVE7TO8 1\n.SH NAME\npve7to8 \- Proxmox VE upgrade checker script for 7.4+ to current 8.x\n" > $@.tmp
-	printf ".SH DESCRIPTION\nThis tool will help you to detect common pitfalls and misconfguration\
-	 before, and during the upgrade of a Proxmox VE system\n" >> $@.tmp
-	printf "Any failure must be addressed before the upgrade, and any waring must be addressed, \
-	 or at least carefully evaluated, if a false-positive is suspected\n" >> $@.tmp
+	printf ".SH DESCRIPTION\nThis tool will help you to detect common pitfalls and misconfiguration\
+	 before, and during the upgrade of a Proxmox VE system.\n" >> $@.tmp
+	printf "Any failures or warnings must be addressed prior to the upgrade.\n" >> $@.tmp
+	printf "If you suspect that a message is a false positive, you have to\
+	 make carefully sure that it really is.\n" >> $@.tmp
 	printf ".SH SYNOPSIS\npve7to8 [--full]\n" >> $@.tmp
 	mv $@.tmp $@
 
-- 
2.39.2





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