From: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
To: pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 4/6] docs: pbs2to3: fix and improve wording
Date: Fri, 24 Nov 2023 18:43:45 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20231124174347.200266-4-a.zeidler@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20231124174347.200266-1-a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler@proxmox.com>
---
docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst | 8 ++++----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst b/docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst
index d6a14b91..f729c6d9 100644
--- a/docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst
+++ b/docs/pbs2to3/man1.rst
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ pbs2to3
Description
===========
-This tool will help you to detect common pitfalls and misconfguration before,
-and during the upgrade of a Proxmox VE system Any failure must be addressed
-before the upgrade, and any waring must be addressed, or at least carefully
-evaluated, if a false-positive is suspected
+This tool will help you to detect common pitfalls and misconfiguration before,
+and during the upgrade of a Proxmox Backup Server system. Any failures or
+warnings must be addressed prior to the upgrade. If you suspect that a message
+is a false positive, you have to make carefully sure that it really is.
.. include:: ../pbs-copyright.rst
--
2.39.2
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2023-11-24 17:44 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 7+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2023-11-24 17:43 [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 1/6] docs: add "Wiki" to sidebar Alexander Zeidler
2023-11-24 17:43 ` [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 2/6] docs: improve the occurrence of product website hyperlinks Alexander Zeidler
2023-11-24 17:43 ` [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 3/6] docs: epilog: update hyperlinks Alexander Zeidler
2023-11-24 17:43 ` Alexander Zeidler [this message]
2023-11-24 17:43 ` [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 5/6] docs: fix typos Alexander Zeidler
2023-11-24 17:43 ` [pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 6/6] docs: replace path list with table for better readability Alexander Zeidler
2023-11-25 15:23 ` [pbs-devel] applied: [PATCH proxmox-backup 1/6] docs: add "Wiki" to sidebar Thomas Lamprecht
Reply instructions:
You may reply publicly to this message via plain-text email
using any one of the following methods:
* Save the following mbox file, import it into your mail client,
and reply-to-all from there: mbox
Avoid top-posting and favor interleaved quoting:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Posting_style#Interleaved_style
* Reply using the --to, --cc, and --in-reply-to
switches of git-send-email(1):
git send-email \
--in-reply-to=20231124174347.200266-4-a.zeidler@proxmox.com \
--to=a.zeidler@proxmox.com \
--cc=pbs-devel@lists.proxmox.com \
/path/to/YOUR_REPLY
https://kernel.org/pub/software/scm/git/docs/git-send-email.html
* If your mail client supports setting the In-Reply-To header
via mailto: links, try the mailto: link
Be sure your reply has a Subject: header at the top and a blank line
before the message body.
This is an external index of several public inboxes,
see mirroring instructions on how to clone and mirror
all data and code used by this external index.
Service provided by Proxmox Server Solutions GmbH | Privacy | Legal