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From: Noel Ullreich <n.ullreich@proxmox.com>
To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH pve-docs] fixed grammar in qm manpage
Date: Fri,  2 Dec 2022 12:52:21 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20221202115221.3645762-1-n.ullreich@proxmox.com> (raw)

Fixed two small grammar errors in the qm manpage. Rephrased a
sentence before the fixed sentence so that it would be more legible.

Signed-off-by: Noel Ullreich <n.ullreich@proxmox.com>
---
 qm.adoc | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/qm.adoc b/qm.adoc
index f923ccf..6f8f8ec 100644
--- a/qm.adoc
+++ b/qm.adoc
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ IO Thread
 The option *IO Thread* can only be used when using a disk with the
 *VirtIO* controller, or with the *SCSI* controller, when the emulated controller
  type is  *VirtIO SCSI single*.
-With this enabled, Qemu creates one I/O thread per storage controller,
+With this enabled, Qemu creates one I/O thread per storage controller
 rather than a single thread for all I/O. This can increase performance when
 multiple disks are used and each disk has its own storage controller.
 
@@ -764,7 +764,7 @@ open-source, x86 BIOS implementation. SeaBIOS is a good choice for most
 standard setups.
 
 Some operating systems (such as Windows 11) may require use of an UEFI
-compatible implementation instead. In such cases, you must rather use *OVMF*,
+compatible implementation. In such cases, you must use *OVMF* instead,
 which is an open-source UEFI implementation. footnote:[See the OVMF Project https://github.com/tianocore/tianocore.github.io/wiki/OVMF]
 
 There are other scenarios in which the SeaBIOS may not be the ideal firmware to
-- 
2.30.2





             reply	other threads:[~2022-12-02 11:52 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 2+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-12-02 11:52 Noel Ullreich [this message]
2023-01-16 15:53 ` [pve-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht

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