From: Matthias Heiserer <m.heiserer@proxmox.com>
To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 06/10] add missing comma in if sentences
Date: Wed, 9 Nov 2022 12:58:24 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20221109115828.137770-7-m.heiserer@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20221109115828.137770-1-m.heiserer@proxmox.com>
Signed-off-by: Matthias Heiserer <m.heiserer@proxmox.com>
---
pve-installation.adoc | 6 +++---
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc
index c86b620..e101ed3 100644
--- a/pve-installation.adoc
+++ b/pve-installation.adoc
@@ -161,10 +161,10 @@ the installation medium and restart your system.
[thumbnail="screenshot/pve-install-summary.png"]
-If the installation failed check out specific errors on the second TTY
-(`CTRL + ALT + F2'), ensure that the systems meets the
+If the installation failed, check out specific errors on the second TTY
+(`CTRL + ALT + F2') and ensure that the systems meets the
xref:install_minimal_requirements[minimum requirements]. If the installation
-is still not working look at the xref:getting_help[how to get help chapter].
+is still not working, look at the xref:getting_help[how to get help chapter].
Further configuration is done via the Proxmox web interface. Point your browser
to the IP address given during installation (https://youripaddress:8006).
--
2.30.2
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2022-11-09 11:59 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 13+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2022-11-09 11:58 [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 00/10] docs (mostly) spelling update Matthias Heiserer
2022-11-09 11:58 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 01/10] consistently use 'web interface' (two words) Matthias Heiserer
2022-11-09 11:58 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 02/10] remove misplaced comma Matthias Heiserer
2022-11-09 11:58 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 03/10] consistently capitalize Ceph Matthias Heiserer
2022-11-09 11:58 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 04/10] add note that secure boot needs to be disabled for host installation Matthias Heiserer
2022-11-09 11:58 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 05/10] move installation options to advanced folder Matthias Heiserer
2022-11-09 14:46 ` Thomas Lamprecht
2022-11-09 11:58 ` Matthias Heiserer [this message]
2022-11-09 11:58 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 07/10] rephrase when root password is set to make it clear that when logging it, it is already set Matthias Heiserer
2022-11-09 11:58 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 08/10] add missing letter Matthias Heiserer
2022-11-09 11:58 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 09/10] it's -> its because it isn't 'it is' Matthias Heiserer
2022-11-09 11:58 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 10/10] update link to debian handbook. current one is 404 Matthias Heiserer
2022-11-09 14:51 ` [pve-devel] applied-series: [PATCH docs 00/10] docs (mostly) spelling update Thomas Lamprecht
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