From: Stoiko Ivanov <s.ivanov@proxmox.com>
To: pmg-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pmg-devel] [PATCH pmg-docs] certs: minor stylistic improvements
Date: Thu, 18 Mar 2021 14:26:29 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20210318132629.26178-1-s.ivanov@proxmox.com> (raw)
Signed-off-by: Stoiko Ivanov <s.ivanov@proxmox.com>
---
noted while preparing the patch for pve-docs
pmg-ssl-certificate.adoc | 13 ++++++-------
1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/pmg-ssl-certificate.adoc b/pmg-ssl-certificate.adoc
index c799edb..6cd44b1 100644
--- a/pmg-ssl-certificate.adoc
+++ b/pmg-ssl-certificate.adoc
@@ -51,9 +51,9 @@ Trusted certificates via Let's Encrypt (ACME)
{PMG} includes an implementation of the **A**utomatic **C**ertificate
**M**anagement **E**nvironment **ACME** protocol, allowing {pmg} admins to
-use an ACME provider like Let's Encrypt for easy setup of trusted TLS
-certificates which are accepted and trusted from modern operating systems
-and web browsers out of the box.
+use an ACME provider like Let's Encrypt for easy setup of TLS certificates
+which are accepted and trusted from modern operating systems and web browsers
+out of the box.
Currently, the two ACME endpoints implemented are the
https://letsencrypt.org[Let's Encrypt (LE)] production and its staging
@@ -93,10 +93,9 @@ the basis building block for automatic certificate management.
The ACME protocol specifies different types of challenges, for example the
`http-01` where a web server provides a file with a certain content to prove
that it controls a domain. Sometimes this isn't possible, either because of
-technical limitations or if the address of a domain points too is not reachable
-from the public internet. The `dns-01` challenge can be used in these cases.
-The challenge is fulfilled by creating a certain DNS record in the domain's
-zone.
+technical limitations or if the address of a record is not reachable from the
+public internet. The `dns-01` challenge can be used in these cases. The
+challenge is fulfilled by creating a certain DNS record in the domain's zone.
[thumbnail="pmg-gui-acme-create-challenge-plugin.png"]
--
2.20.1
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2021-03-18 13:26 Stoiko Ivanov [this message]
2021-03-18 16:42 ` [pmg-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
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