* [pbs-devel] [PATCH pve-installer] PBS installer: Language fixup
@ 2020-11-09 12:11 Dylan Whyte
2020-11-09 12:35 ` [pbs-devel] applied: " Thomas Lamprecht
0 siblings, 1 reply; 2+ messages in thread
From: Dylan Whyte @ 2020-11-09 12:11 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: pbs-devel
- Correct spelling and grammar
- Minor rewordings for readability
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
---
html-common/ack_template.htm | 4 ++--
html-common/country.htm | 10 +++++-----
html-common/ipconf.htm | 6 +++---
html-common/success.htm | 2 +-
| 4 ++--
| 14 ++++++++++----
| 8 ++++----
| 2 +-
html-pbs/page1.htm | 6 +++---
html-pbs/passwd.htm | 10 +++++-----
10 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)
diff --git a/html-common/ack_template.htm b/html-common/ack_template.htm
index e3e2775..48d7213 100644
--- a/html-common/ack_template.htm
+++ b/html-common/ack_template.htm
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
<table>
<tbody>
<tr><td>
- <b>Please verify</b> the displayed informations.
+ <b>Please confirm</b> the displayed information.
Once you press the <b>Install</b> button, the installer will begin to partition your drive(s) and extract the required files.
</td></tr>
</tbody></table>
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
<tr><td>Keymap:</td> <td>__keymap__</td></tr>
- <tr><td>E-Mail:</td> <td>__mailto__</td></tr>
+ <tr><td>Email:</td> <td>__mailto__</td></tr>
<tr><td>Management Interface:</td> <td>__interface__</td></tr>
diff --git a/html-common/country.htm b/html-common/country.htm
index 6503afb..990a39f 100644
--- a/html-common/country.htm
+++ b/html-common/country.htm
@@ -16,11 +16,11 @@
<td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p>
<table>
<tr><td><b>The Proxmox Installer</b>
- automatically makes location based optimizations, like
- choosing the nearest mirror to download files. Also make sure
- to select the right time zone and keyboard layout.
+ automatically makes location-based optimizations, like
+ choosing the nearest mirror to download files from. Also make sure
+ to select the correct time zone and keyboard layout.
<br><br>
- Press the Next button to continue installation.
+ Press the Next button to continue the installation.
</td></tr>
</table>
</p></td>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
<td valign="top"><b>Country:</b>
The selected country is used to choose nearby mirror
- servers. This will speedup downloads and make updates more
+ servers. This will speed up downloads and make updates more
reliable.
<br><br>
</td>
diff --git a/html-common/ipconf.htm b/html-common/ipconf.htm
index fb46510..ed3fd9d 100644
--- a/html-common/ipconf.htm
+++ b/html-common/ipconf.htm
@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@
<tbody>
<tr><td><b>Please verify</b> the displayed network configuration. You
will need a valid network configuration to access the management
- interface after installation.<br><br>
- Afterwards press the Next button. You will be shown a list of the
- options that you chose during the previous steps.
+ interface after installing.<br><br>
+ After you have finished, press the Next button. You will be shown a
+ list of the options that you chose during the previous steps.
</td></tr>
</tbody>
</table>
diff --git a/html-common/success.htm b/html-common/success.htm
index a6884b3..218ecff 100644
--- a/html-common/success.htm
+++ b/html-common/success.htm
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
<p>
<b class="htext">Installation successful!</b>
<br><br><br>
- The __FULL_PRODUCT_NAME__ is now installed and ready to use.
+ __FULL_PRODUCT_NAME__ is now installed and ready to use.
<br><br><br>
<table border="0" width="500">
<tbody><tr>
--git a/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm b/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm
index df77fa8..9ceae4f 100644
--- a/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/extract1-license.htm
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
- Easy management<br>
For more information, visit <b>www.proxmox.com</b>
- or the project page about Proxmox Backup Server.
+ or the Proxmox Backup Server project page.
<br><br>
</td></tr>
</table>
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
<td valign="top">
<b>Graphical User Interface</b><br>
- Easily manage your data backups with the integrated web interface .<br><br>
+ Easily manage your backups with the integrated web interface.<br><br>
</td>
</tr>
<tr>
--git a/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm b/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm
index 7f80d75..bede21f 100644
--- a/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm
@@ -16,8 +16,12 @@
<td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p>
<table>
<tr><td>
- Proxmox Backup Server is production-ready and saves you money by reducing the amount of data stored.<br><br>The role based permission management combined with the integration of multiple external authentication sources is the base for a secure and stable environment.<br><br>
- Visit <b>www.proxmox.com</b> for more information about commercial support subscriptions.<br><br>
+ Proxmox Backup Server is production-ready and saves you money, by
+ reducing the amount of data stored.<br><br>The role-based permission
+ management, combined with the integration of multiple external
+ authentication sources provides the basis for a secure and stable
+ environment.<br><br>
+ Visit <b>www.proxmox.com</b> for more information regarding commercial support subscriptions.<br><br>
</td></tr>
</table>
</p></td>
@@ -36,7 +40,9 @@
<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
<td valign="top">
<b>RESTful web API</b><br>
- Resource-oriented architecture (ROA) and declarative API definition using JSON Schema enable easy integration for third party management tools.
+ The resource-oriented architecture (ROA) and declarative API definition
+ using JSON Schema enable easy integration for third party
+ management tools.
</td>
</tr>
<tr></tr>
@@ -44,7 +50,7 @@
<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
<td valign="top">
<b>Encryption</b><br>
- To help protect against cyber attacks, encryption of your backups is done on the client-side using AES-256 in GCM mode.
+ To help protect against cyber attacks, encryption of your backups is done on the client-side, using AES-256 in GCM mode.
</td>
</tr>
<tr></tr>
--git a/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm b/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm
index ce606b7..4dd1f09 100644
--- a/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
<td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p>
<table>
<tr><td>
- With the Proxmox Backup Server you can safely backup and restore your business critical data.<br>
+ With the Proxmox Backup Server, you can safely backup and restore your business critical data.<br>
</td></tr>
</table>
</p></td>
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
<td valign="top">
<b>Support for Proxmox VE</b><br>
- The Proxmox Virtual Environment is fully supported and the seamless integration
- allows you to easily backup VMs and container.<br>
+ The Proxmox Virtual Environment is fully supported, and the seamless integration
+ allows you to easily backup VMs and containers.<br>
</td>
</tr>
<tr></tr>
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
<td valign="top">
<b>Web Console</b><br>
- SSL secured browser-integrated console view to all datastores.<br>
+ SSL-secured, browser-integrated system console.<br>
</td>
</tr>
<tr></tr>
--git a/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm b/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm
index 28efbe4..74069ec 100644
--- a/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
<table>
<tr><td>
<b>Data Integrity</b><br>
- The built in SHA-256 checksum algorithm assures the accuracy and consistency of your backups.<br><br>
+ The built in SHA-256 checksum algorithm ensures the accuracy and consistency of your backups.<br><br>
</td></tr>
<tr><td>
<b>Compression</b><br>
diff --git a/html-pbs/page1.htm b/html-pbs/page1.htm
index 99b9c7e..debfdf1 100644
--- a/html-pbs/page1.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/page1.htm
@@ -17,10 +17,10 @@
<table>
<tbody><tr><td><b>The Proxmox Installer</b>
automatically partitions your hard disk. It installs all required
- packages and finally makes the system bootable from hard disk.
+ packages and makes the system bootable from the hard disk.
All existing partitions and data will be lost.
<br><br>
- To continue installation, press the Next button.
+ To continue the installation, press the Next button.
</td></tr>
</tbody></table>
</p></td>
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
<td valign="top" width="560"><b>Graphical user interface</b><br>
Final configuration will be done on the graphical user
- interface via a web browser.
+ interface, via a web browser.
<br><br>
</td>
</tr>
diff --git a/html-pbs/passwd.htm b/html-pbs/passwd.htm
index 07f0d77..d331b28 100644
--- a/html-pbs/passwd.htm
+++ b/html-pbs/passwd.htm
@@ -9,14 +9,14 @@
<tr><td> </td></tr>
<tr>
<td colspan="4" align="center" width="800">
- <b class="htext">Administration Password and E-Mail Address</b>
+ <b class="htext">Administration Password and Email Address</b>
</td>
</tr>
<tr>
<td colspan="2" valign="top" width="400"><br><p>
<table>
<tr><td><b>Proxmox Backup Server</b> is a
- full-featured, highly secure system based on Debian GNU/Linux.
+ full-featured, highly secure system, based on Debian GNU/Linux.
<br><br>
In this step, please provide the <i>root</i> password.
</td></tr>
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
<tr>
<td valign="top" width="30"><img src="plus.png"></td>
<td valign="top"><b>Password:</b>
- Please use a strong password. It should have 8 or more characters.
- Also combine letters, numbers, and symbols.
+ Please use a strong password. It should be at least 8 characters long,
+ and contain a combination of letters, numbers, and symbols.
<br><br>
</td>
</tr>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
</tr>
<tr>
<td valign="top" width="30"></td>
- <td valign="top">To continue installation, press the Next button.</td>
+ <td valign="top">To continue the installation, press the Next button.</td>
</tr>
</table>
</p></td>
--
2.20.1
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* [pbs-devel] applied: [PATCH pve-installer] PBS installer: Language fixup
2020-11-09 12:11 [pbs-devel] [PATCH pve-installer] PBS installer: Language fixup Dylan Whyte
@ 2020-11-09 12:35 ` Thomas Lamprecht
0 siblings, 0 replies; 2+ messages in thread
From: Thomas Lamprecht @ 2020-11-09 12:35 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Proxmox Backup Server development discussion, Dylan Whyte
On 09.11.20 13:11, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> - Correct spelling and grammar
> - Minor rewordings for readability
>
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
> html-common/ack_template.htm | 4 ++--
> html-common/country.htm | 10 +++++-----
> html-common/ipconf.htm | 6 +++---
> html-common/success.htm | 2 +-
> html-pbs/extract1-license.htm | 4 ++--
> html-pbs/extract2-rulesystem.htm | 14 ++++++++++----
> html-pbs/extract3-spam.htm | 8 ++++----
> html-pbs/extract4-virus.htm | 2 +-
> html-pbs/page1.htm | 6 +++---
> html-pbs/passwd.htm | 10 +++++-----
> 10 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)
>
>
applied, thanks!
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