From: "Dominic Jäger" <d.jaeger@proxmox.com>
To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com
Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 2/4] pvecm: Add comma after 'First'
Date: Tue, 28 Jul 2020 11:32:13 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20200728093215.44860-2-d.jaeger@proxmox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20200728093215.44860-1-d.jaeger@proxmox.com>
Comma after sequence words like first, next, then, or last.
Signed-off-by: Dominic Jäger <d.jaeger@proxmox.com>
---
pvecm.adoc | 6 +++---
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/pvecm.adoc b/pvecm.adoc
index e7b36c5..390fb4b 100644
--- a/pvecm.adoc
+++ b/pvecm.adoc
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ node from the cluster.
WARNING: Ensure all shared resources are cleanly separated! Otherwise you will
run into conflicts and problems.
-First stop the corosync and the pve-cluster services on the node:
+First, stop the corosync and the pve-cluster services on the node:
[source,bash]
----
systemctl stop pve-cluster
@@ -527,7 +527,7 @@ application.
Setting Up A New Network
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
-First you have to set up a new network interface. It should be on a physically
+First, you have to set up a new network interface. It should be on a physically
separate network. Ensure that your network fulfills the
xref:pvecm_cluster_network_requirements[cluster network requirements].
@@ -957,7 +957,7 @@ configured to do so.
The traffic between the daemon and the cluster must be encrypted to ensure a
safe and secure QDevice integration in {pve}.
-First install the 'corosync-qnetd' package on your external server and
+First, install the 'corosync-qnetd' package on your external server and
the 'corosync-qdevice' package on all cluster nodes.
After that, ensure that all your nodes on the cluster are online.
--
2.20.1
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2020-07-28 9:32 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2020-07-28 9:32 [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 1/4] qdevice: Remove a wrong 's' Dominic Jäger
2020-07-28 9:32 ` Dominic Jäger [this message]
2020-07-28 9:32 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 3/4] qdevice: Add note about root login requirements Dominic Jäger
2020-07-28 9:32 ` [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 4/4] qdevice: Clarify required packages Dominic Jäger
2020-08-11 13:34 ` [pve-devel] applied-series: [PATCH docs 1/4] qdevice: Remove a wrong 's' Fabian Grünbichler
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