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Subject: [pve-devel] applied: [PATCH v2 pve-docs 2/3] ha-manager: fix typos
 and grammatical errors; improve wording
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On 16.07.20 10:55, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> This patch improves the English throughout the "High Availability"
> documentation.
> It mostly consists of small typo and grammar fixes, but also contains rewording
> of some sections for the sake of readability.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
>  ha-manager.adoc | 214 ++++++++++++++++++++++++------------------------
>  1 file changed, 107 insertions(+), 107 deletions(-)
> 
>

applied, thanks! Exactly how I like docs patches, non-intrusive and easy
to review - great!