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Subject: [pve-devel] applied: [PATCH pve-docs] pvesdn: langauge and
 formatting fixup
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On 08.04.22 16:13, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> Mostly improves langauge with some minor formatting fixes.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
>  pvesdn.adoc | 464 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------------
>  1 file changed, 238 insertions(+), 226 deletions(-)
> 
>

applied, thanks!