From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 477BA97809 for ; Tue, 5 Mar 2024 13:00:48 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 264D173D6 for ; Tue, 5 Mar 2024 13:00:48 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [94.136.29.106]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS for ; Tue, 5 Mar 2024 13:00:43 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id ABD1F487D3 for ; Tue, 5 Mar 2024 13:00:43 +0100 (CET) Date: Tue, 5 Mar 2024 13:00:43 +0100 From: Christoph Heiss To: Gabriel Goller Cc: Proxmox VE development discussion Message-ID: References: <20240304132221.901327-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> <20240304132221.901327-6-c.heiss@proxmox.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL 0.005 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE -0.01 - Subject: Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 5/9] package-repos: align wording with pmg-docs X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 05 Mar 2024 12:00:48 -0000 On Tue, Mar 05, 2024 at 09:28:21AM +0100, Gabriel Goller wrote: > On Mon Mar 4, 2024 at 2:22 PM CET, Christoph Heiss wrote: > > The `root@pam` user is notified via email about available updates. Click the > > 'Changelog' button in the GUI to see more details about the selected update. > > > > -You need a valid subscription key to access the `pve-enterprise` repository. > > -Different support levels are available. Further details can be found at > > -{pricing-url}. > > +As soon as updates are available, the `root@pam` user is notified via email > > +about the newly available packages. From the GUI, the 'Changelog' button in the > > +GUI can be used to see more details about the selected update. > > +Thus, you will never miss important security fixes. > > The section about the 'Changelog' button is duplicated, it is already in > the paragraph above. > Also `GUI` appears twice in the same sentence, I would propose something > like this (if we use the second sentence): > > The 'Changelog' button in the GUI can be used to see more > details about the selected update. > Yep, both paragraphs can indeed be a bit de-duplicated, will do! Thanks!