From mboxrd@z Thu Jan  1 00:00:00 1970
Return-Path: <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68])
 (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits)
 key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits))
 (No client certificate requested)
 by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id B564362443
 for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 23 Nov 2020 13:37:17 +0100 (CET)
Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1])
 by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id AD4E628C1D
 for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 23 Nov 2020 13:37:17 +0100 (CET)
Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com
 [212.186.127.180])
 (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits)
 key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits))
 (No client certificate requested)
 by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS id A197F28C11
 for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 23 Nov 2020 13:37:16 +0100 (CET)
Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1])
 by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 6CF7943EDE
 for <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>; Mon, 23 Nov 2020 13:37:16 +0100 (CET)
To: Proxmox VE development discussion <pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>,
 Dominik Csapak <d.csapak@proxmox.com>
References: <20201123110425.30087-1-d.csapak@proxmox.com>
From: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
Message-ID: <bed121d6-b7b6-e08e-ad64-7ccbed45f821@proxmox.com>
Date: Mon, 23 Nov 2020 13:37:15 +0100
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:83.0) Gecko/20100101
 Thunderbird/83.0
MIME-Version: 1.0
In-Reply-To: <20201123110425.30087-1-d.csapak@proxmox.com>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8
Content-Language: en-US
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results:  0
 AWL -0.084 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address
 KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment
 RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED        -2.3 Sender listed at https://www.dnswl.org/,
 medium trust
 SPF_HELO_NONE           0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record
 SPF_PASS               -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record
Subject: [pve-devel] applied: [PATCH docs] external metric server: update
 wording and add new info/screenshots
X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
Precedence: list
List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion <pve-devel.lists.proxmox.com>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/options/pve-devel>, 
 <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/>
List-Post: <mailto:pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com>
List-Help: <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel>, 
 <mailto:pve-devel-request@lists.proxmox.com?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 23 Nov 2020 12:37:17 -0000

On 23.11.20 12:04, Dominik Csapak wrote:
> drop the 'since 4.0' wording and the config editing part. instead
> mention the gui and add screenshots
>=20
> also mentions now the new options the plugins
>=20
> Signed-off-by: Dominik Csapak <d.csapak@proxmox.com>
> ---
>  .../gui-datacenter-metric-server-graphite.png | Bin 0 -> 15274 bytes
>  .../gui-datacenter-metric-server-influxdb.png | Bin 0 -> 13332 bytes
>  .../gui-datacenter-metric-server-list.png     | Bin 0 -> 46346 bytes
>  pve-external-metric-server.adoc               |  58 ++++++------------=

>  4 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-)
>  create mode 100644 images/screenshot/gui-datacenter-metric-server-grap=
hite.png
>  create mode 100644 images/screenshot/gui-datacenter-metric-server-infl=
uxdb.png
>  create mode 100644 images/screenshot/gui-datacenter-metric-server-list=
=2Epng
>=20

applied, thanks! Did a few style and grammar followups (an additional vie=
w wouldn't
hurt though @Dylan).

Also dropped the invisible white space which you noticed.