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Subject: Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH pve-manager 6/7] fabrics: Add main FabricView
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Some comments inline - did the review mostly in tandem with testing the
UI, to get a better context.

On Fri Mar 28, 2025 at 6:13 PM CET, Gabriel Goller wrote:
[..]
> diff --git a/www/manager6/dc/Config.js b/www/manager6/dc/Config.js
> index 74728c8320e9..68f7be8d6042 100644
> --- a/www/manager6/dc/Config.js
> +++ b/www/manager6/dc/Config.js
> @@ -229,6 +229,14 @@ Ext.define('PVE.dc.Config', {
>  		    hidden: true,
>  		    iconCls: 'fa fa-shield',
>  		    itemId: 'sdnfirewall',
> +		},
> +		{
> +		    xtype: 'pveSDNFabricView',
> +		    groups: ['sdn'],
> +		    title: gettext('Fabrics'),

Do we really want to translate 'Fabrics'? Or rather just keep the name
always at 'Fabrics' as the name of the concept/feature itself? Since it
is a established term, after all. I'd keep it, IMHO.

(But we seem to translate everything else here in the file, so really
not sure.)

> +		    hidden: true,
> +		    iconCls: 'fa fa-road',
> +		    itemId: 'sdnfabrics',
>  		});
>  	    }
>
> diff --git a/www/manager6/sdn/FabricsView.js b/www/manager6/sdn/FabricsView.js
> new file mode 100644
> index 000000000000..0ef12defb1a8
> --- /dev/null
> +++ b/www/manager6/sdn/FabricsView.js
[..]
> +Ext.define('PVE.sdn.Fabric.View', {
[..]
> +	{
> +	    text: gettext('Protocol'),
> +	    dataIndex: 'protocol',
> +	    width: 100,
> +	    renderer: function(value, metaData, rec) {
> +		if (rec.data.type !== 'fabric') {
> +		    return "";
> +		}
> +
> +		return PVE.Utils.render_sdn_pending(rec, value, 'protocol');
> +	    },

A mapping for the internal protocol name to a user-visible would be nice
here, i.e. 'ospf' -> 'OSPF' and 'openfabric' -> 'OpenFabric'. Not much
difference currently, but would look a bit better in the UI :)

> +	},
> +	{
> +	    text: gettext('Loopback IP'),
> +	    dataIndex: 'router_id',
> +	    width: 150,
> +	    renderer: function(value, metaData, rec) {
> +		if (rec.data.type === 'fabric') {
> +		    return PVE.Utils.render_sdn_pending(rec, rec.data.loopback_prefix, 'loopback_prefix');
> +		}
> +
> +		return PVE.Utils.render_sdn_pending(rec, value, 'router_id');
> +	    },
> +	},
> +	{
> +	    text: gettext('Action'),
> +	    xtype: 'actioncolumn',
> +	    dataIndex: 'text',
> +	    width: 100,
> +	    items: [
> +		{
> +		    handler: 'addActionTreeColumn',
> +		    getTip: (_v, _m, _rec) => gettext('Add'),

nit: "Add Node" would be better here for node rows, if that's possible.

> +		    getClass: (_v, _m, { data }) => {
> +			if (data.type === 'fabric') {
> +			    return 'fa fa-plus-circle';
> +			}
> +
> +			return 'pmx-hidden';
> +		    },
> +		    isActionDisabled: (_v, _r, _c, _i, { data }) => data.type !== 'fabric',
> +		},
> +		{
> +		    tooltip: gettext('Edit'),

^ same as above

> +		    handler: 'editAction',
> +		    getClass: (_v, _m, { data }) => {
> +			// the fabric type (openfabric, ospf, etc.) cannot be edited
> +			if (data.type) {
> +			    return 'fa fa-pencil fa-fw';
> +			}
> +
> +			return 'pmx-hidden';
> +		    },
> +		    isActionDisabled: (_v, _r, _c, _i, { data }) => !data.type,
> +		},
> +		{
> +		    tooltip: gettext('Delete'),

^ and same here as well

> +		    handler: 'deleteAction',
> +		    getClass: (_v, _m, { data }) => {
> +			// the fabric type (openfabric, ospf, etc.) cannot be deleted
> +			if (data.type) {
> +			    return 'fa critical fa-trash-o';
> +			}
> +
> +			return 'pmx-hidden';
> +		    },
> +		    isActionDisabled: (_v, _r, _c, _i, { data }) => !data.type,
> +		},
> +	    ],
> +	},
> +	{
> +	    header: gettext('Interfaces'),
> +	    width: 100,
> +	    dataIndex: 'interface',
> +	    renderer: function(value, metaData, rec) {
> +		let interfaces = rec.data.pending?.interface || rec.data.interface || [];

nit: could be const (see [0] tho regarding rules for const/let)

[0] https://pve.proxmox.com/wiki/Javascript_Style_Guide#Variables

> +
> +		let names = interfaces.map((iface) => {
> +		    let properties = Proxmox.Utils.parsePropertyString(iface);

nit: same here, as well for some other things in this file

> +		    return properties.name;
> +		});
> +
> +		names.sort();
> +		return names.join(", ");
> +	    },
> +	},
[..]
> +
> +    initComponent: function() {
> +	let me = this;
> +
> +
> +	let add_button = new Proxmox.button.Button({

New variables should generally be camelCase [0].

[1] https://pve.proxmox.com/wiki/Javascript_Style_Guide#Casing

> +	    text: gettext('Add Node'),
> +	    handler: 'addActionTbar',
> +	    disabled: true,
> +	});

Since there is also an "add node" button in the "Action" column for each
fabric, do we need a separate one in the top-bar as well?

> +
> +	let set_add_button_status = function() {
> +	    let selection = me.view.getSelection();
> +
> +	    if (selection.length === 0) {
> +		return;
> +	    }
> +
> +	    add_button.setDisabled(selection[0].data.type !== 'fabric');
> +	};
> +
> +	Ext.apply(me, {
> +	    tbar: [
> +		{
> +		    text: gettext('Add Fabric'),
> +		    menu: [
> +			{
> +			    text: gettext('OpenFabric'),

'OpenFabric' also should not be translated, right? As its the name of
the implementation/protocol.

> +			    handler: 'openAddOpenFabricWindow',
> +			},
> +			{
> +			    text: gettext('OSPF'),

^ same here

> +			    handler: 'openAddOspfWindow',
> +			},
> +		    ],
> +		},
[..]
> +    controller: {
> +	xclass: 'Ext.app.ViewController',
> +
> +	reload: function() {
> +	    let me = this;
> +
> +	    Proxmox.Utils.API2Request({
> +		url: `/cluster/sdn/fabrics/?pending=1`,
> +		method: 'GET',
> +		success: function(response, opts) {
> +		    let ospf = response.result.data.ospf;
> +		    let openfabric = response.result.data.openfabric;
> +
> +		    // add some metadata so we can merge the objects later and still know the protocol/type
> +		    ospf = ospf.map(x => {
> +			if (x.state && x.state === 'new') {
> +			    Object.assign(x, x.pending);
> +			}
> +
> +			if (x.ty === 'fabric') {
> +			    return Object.assign(x, { protocol: "ospf", name: x.area });
> +			} else if (x.ty === 'node') {
> +			    let id = x.node_id.split("_");
> +			    return Object.assign(x,
> +				{
> +				    protocol: "ospf",
> +				    node: id[1],
> +				    fabric: id[0],
> +				},
> +			    );
> +			} else {
> +			    return x;
> +			}
> +		    });

Perhaps factor this out a bit into a separate function, making the
success() definition here a bit more succinct?

> +		    openfabric = openfabric.map(x => {
> +			if (x.state && x.state === 'new') {
> +			    Object.assign(x, x.pending);
> +			}
> +
> +			if (x.ty === 'fabric') {
> +			    return Object.assign(x, { protocol: "openfabric", name: x.fabric_id });
> +			} else if (x.ty === 'node') {
> +			    let id = x.node_id.split("_");
> +			    return Object.assign(x,
> +				{
> +				    protocol: "openfabric",
> +				    node: id[1],
> +				    fabric: id[0],
> +				},
> +			    );
> +			} else {
> +			    return x;
> +			}
> +		    });

^ same for the openfabric mapping

> +
> +		    let allFabrics = openfabric.concat(ospf);
> +		    let fabrics = allFabrics.filter(e => e.ty === "fabric").map((fabric) => {
> +			if (!fabric.state || fabric.state !== 'deleted') {
> +			    fabric.children = allFabrics.filter(e => e.ty === "node")
> +				.filter((node) =>
> +				    node.fabric === fabric.name && node.protocol === fabric.protocol)
> +					.map((node) => {
> +					    Object.assign(node, {
> +						leaf: true,
> +						type: 'node',
> +						iconCls: 'fa fa-desktop x-fa-treepanel',
> +						name: node.node,
> +						_fabric: fabric.name,
> +					    });
> +
> +					    return node;
> +					});

^ and same here, moving it into a separate function instead of
open-coding it here. Would make the whole bit here more readable/easier
to understand.

> +			}
> +
> +			Object.assign(fabric, {
> +			    type: 'fabric',
> +			    protocol: fabric.protocol,
> +			    expanded: true,
> +			    name: fabric.fabric_id || fabric.area,
> +			    iconCls: 'fa fa-road x-fa-treepanel',
> +			});
> +
> +			return fabric;
> +		    });
> +
[..]
> +
> +	addActionTreeColumn: function(_grid, _rI, _cI, _item, _e, rec) {
> +	    let me = this;

nit: never used, just drop it

> +	    this.addAction(rec);
> +	},
> +
[..]
> +
> +	deleteAction: function(table, rI, cI, item, e, { data }) {
> +	    let me = this;
> +	    let view = me.getView();
> +
> +	    Ext.Msg.show({
> +		title: gettext('Confirm'),
> +		icon: Ext.Msg.WARNING,
> +		message: Ext.String.format(gettext('Are you sure you want to remove the fabric {0}?'), `${data.name}`),

nit: unnecessary string interpolation

> +		buttons: Ext.Msg.YESNO,
> +		defaultFocus: 'no',
> +		callback: function(btn) {
> +		    if (btn !== 'yes') {
> +			return;
> +		    }
> +
> +		    let url;
> +		    if (data.type === "node") {
> +			url = `/cluster/sdn/fabrics/${data.protocol}/${data._fabric}/node/${data.name}`;
> +		    } else if (data.type === "fabric") {
> +			url = `/cluster/sdn/fabrics/${data.protocol}/${data.name}`;
> +		    } else {
> +			console.warn("deleteAction: missing type");
> +		    }
> +
> +		    Proxmox.Utils.API2Request({
> +			url,
> +			method: 'DELETE',
> +			waitMsgTarget: view,
> +			failure: function(response, opts) {
> +			    Ext.Msg.alert(gettext('Error'), response.htmlStatus);

Could use `Proxmox.Utils.errorText` here instead of `gettext('Error')`.

> +			},
> +			callback: me.reload.bind(me),

nit: `() => me.reload()` is already used multiple times in this file, so
use that here too for consistency? Think it's the preferred style
anyway.

> +		    });
> +		},
> +	    });
> +	},
> +
> +	openAddOpenFabricWindow: function() {
> +	    let me = this;
> +
> +	    let window = Ext.create('PVE.sdn.Fabric.OpenFabric.Fabric.Edit', {
> +		autoShow: true,
> +		autoLoad: false,
> +		isCreate: true,
> +	    });
> +
> +	    window.on('destroy', () => me.reload());
> +	},
> +
> +	openAddOspfWindow: function() {
> +	    let me = this;
> +
> +	    let window = Ext.create('PVE.sdn.Fabric.Ospf.Fabric.Edit', {
> +		autoShow: true,
> +		autoLoad: false,
> +		isCreate: true,
> +	    });
> +
> +	    window.on('destroy', () => me.reload());
> +	},
> +
> +	init: function(view) {
> +	    let me = this;
> +	    me.reload();
> +	},
> +    },
> +});



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