From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 855EBB8BB7 for ; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 15:10:40 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 65E9EA158 for ; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 15:10:40 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [94.136.29.106]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS for ; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 15:10:39 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 62AC3488F2 for ; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 15:10:39 +0100 (CET) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Date: Mon, 11 Mar 2024 15:10:38 +0100 Message-Id: From: "Stefan Sterz" To: "Proxmox VE development discussion" X-Mailer: aerc 0.17.0-69-g65571b67d7d3-dirty References: <20240311122938.565228-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> <20240311122938.565228-2-c.heiss@proxmox.com> In-Reply-To: <20240311122938.565228-2-c.heiss@proxmox.com> X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL -0.474 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_ASCII_DIVIDERS 0.8 Email that uses ascii formatting dividers and possible spam tricks KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE -0.01 - Subject: Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs v2 1/5] package-repos: improve wording partly based on pmg-docs X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 11 Mar 2024 14:10:40 -0000 On Mon Mar 11, 2024 at 1:29 PM CET, Christoph Heiss wrote: > Some sentences are phrased better and more expansive in pmg-docs, so > take them from there and adapt them as needed. > > Rephrases some redundant parts (e.g. enterprise repo introduction) and > moves the email/changelog paragraph to the top, since that applies to > all repos. > > Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss > --- > Changes v1 -> v2: > * deduplicate email/changelog paragraph, move to top > * deduplicate enterprise repo introduction sentence > * very slightly reword some phrases > > pve-package-repos.adoc | 26 ++++++++++++++------------ > 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/pve-package-repos.adoc b/pve-package-repos.adoc > index b0c2a95..4586f70 100644 > --- a/pve-package-repos.adoc > +++ b/pve-package-repos.adoc > @@ -8,6 +8,10 @@ endif::wiki[] > {pve} uses http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Advanced_Packaging_Tool[APT] as = its > package management tool like any other Debian-based system. > > +{pve} automatically checks for package updates on a daily basis. The `ro= ot@pam` > +user is notified via email about available updates. From the GUI, The "The" at the end of this line should be lower case. > +'Changelog' button can be used to see more details about the selected up= date. > + > Repositories in {pve} > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ > > @@ -57,21 +61,18 @@ deb http://security.debian.org/debian-security bookwo= rm-security main contrib > {pve} Enterprise Repository > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ > > -This is the default, stable, and recommended repository, available for a= ll {pve} > -subscription users. It contains the most stable packages and is suitable= for > -production use. The `pve-enterprise` repository is enabled by default: > +This is the recommended repository and available for all {pve} subscript= ion > +users. It contains the most stable packages and is suitable for producti= on use. > +The `pve-enterprise` repository is enabled by default: > > .File `/etc/apt/sources.list.d/pve-enterprise.list` > ---- > deb https://enterprise.proxmox.com/debian/pve bookworm pve-enterprise > ---- > > -The `root@pam` user is notified via email about available updates. Click= the > -'Changelog' button in the GUI to see more details about the selected upd= ate. > - > -You need a valid subscription key to access the `pve-enterprise` reposit= ory. > -Different support levels are available. Further details can be found at > -{pricing-url}. > +Please note that you need a valid subscription key to access the > +`pve-enterprise` repository. We offer different support levels, which yo= u can > +find further details about at {pricing-url}. > > NOTE: You can disable this repository by commenting out the above line u= sing a > `#` (at the start of the line). This prevents error messages if your hos= t does > @@ -82,9 +83,10 @@ repository in that case. > {pve} No-Subscription Repository > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ > > -This is the recommended repository for testing and non-production use. I= ts > -packages are not as heavily tested and validated. You don't need a subsc= ription key > -to access the `pve-no-subscription` repository. > +As the name suggests, you do not need a subscription key to access > +this repository. It can be used for testing and non-production > +use. It's not recommended to use this on production servers, as these > +packages are not always as heavily tested and validated. > > We recommend to configure this repository in `/etc/apt/sources.list`. > > -- > 2.43.1 > > > > _______________________________________________ > pve-devel mailing list > pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com > https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel