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Subject: Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs v2 1/5] package-repos: improve wording
partly based on pmg-docs
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On Mon Mar 11, 2024 at 1:29 PM CET, Christoph Heiss wrote:
> Some sentences are phrased better and more expansive in pmg-docs, so
> take them from there and adapt them as needed.
>
> Rephrases some redundant parts (e.g. enterprise repo introduction) and
> moves the email/changelog paragraph to the top, since that applies to
> all repos.
>
> Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss@proxmox.com>
> ---
> Changes v1 -> v2:
> * deduplicate email/changelog paragraph, move to top
> * deduplicate enterprise repo introduction sentence
> * very slightly reword some phrases
>
> pve-package-repos.adoc | 26 ++++++++++++++------------
> 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/pve-package-repos.adoc b/pve-package-repos.adoc
> index b0c2a95..4586f70 100644
> --- a/pve-package-repos.adoc
> +++ b/pve-package-repos.adoc
> @@ -8,6 +8,10 @@ endif::wiki[]
> {pve} uses http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Advanced_Packaging_Tool[APT] as =
its
> package management tool like any other Debian-based system.
>
> +{pve} automatically checks for package updates on a daily basis. The `ro=
ot@pam`
> +user is notified via email about available updates. From the GUI, The
"The" at the end of this line should be lower case.
> +'Changelog' button can be used to see more details about the selected up=
date.
> +
> Repositories in {pve}
> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
>
> @@ -57,21 +61,18 @@ deb http://security.debian.org/debian-security bookwo=
rm-security main contrib
> {pve} Enterprise Repository
> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
>
> -This is the default, stable, and recommended repository, available for a=
ll {pve}
> -subscription users. It contains the most stable packages and is suitable=
for
> -production use. The `pve-enterprise` repository is enabled by default:
> +This is the recommended repository and available for all {pve} subscript=
ion
> +users. It contains the most stable packages and is suitable for producti=
on use.
> +The `pve-enterprise` repository is enabled by default:
>
> .File `/etc/apt/sources.list.d/pve-enterprise.list`
> ----
> deb https://enterprise.proxmox.com/debian/pve bookworm pve-enterprise
> ----
>
> -The `root@pam` user is notified via email about available updates. Click=
the
> -'Changelog' button in the GUI to see more details about the selected upd=
ate.
> -
> -You need a valid subscription key to access the `pve-enterprise` reposit=
ory.
> -Different support levels are available. Further details can be found at
> -{pricing-url}.
> +Please note that you need a valid subscription key to access the
> +`pve-enterprise` repository. We offer different support levels, which yo=
u can
> +find further details about at {pricing-url}.
>
> NOTE: You can disable this repository by commenting out the above line u=
sing a
> `#` (at the start of the line). This prevents error messages if your hos=
t does
> @@ -82,9 +83,10 @@ repository in that case.
> {pve} No-Subscription Repository
> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
>
> -This is the recommended repository for testing and non-production use. I=
ts
> -packages are not as heavily tested and validated. You don't need a subsc=
ription key
> -to access the `pve-no-subscription` repository.
> +As the name suggests, you do not need a subscription key to access
> +this repository. It can be used for testing and non-production
> +use. It's not recommended to use this on production servers, as these
> +packages are not always as heavily tested and validated.
>
> We recommend to configure this repository in `/etc/apt/sources.list`.
>
> --
> 2.43.1
>
>
>
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