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Subject: Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 6/9] installation: iso: improve & align
 wording with pmg-docs
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On Mon Mar 4, 2024 at 2:22 PM CET, Christoph Heiss wrote:
> +When copying and setting up the packages has finished, you can reboot th=
e
> +server. This will be done automatically after a few seconds by default.

I would remove the `by default` so that the sentence becomes:

    This will be done automatically after a few seconds.

> +. Log in using the `root` (realm 'PAM') username and the password chosen=
 during
> +installation.

I think you need to fix the indentation here...