From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 79E809744E for ; Tue, 5 Mar 2024 09:28:53 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 61EF02E60 for ; Tue, 5 Mar 2024 09:28:23 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [94.136.29.106]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS for ; Tue, 5 Mar 2024 09:28:22 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 21AF441DCD for ; Tue, 5 Mar 2024 09:28:22 +0100 (CET) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Date: Tue, 05 Mar 2024 09:28:21 +0100 Message-Id: From: "Gabriel Goller" To: "Proxmox VE development discussion" X-Mailer: aerc 0.17.0-37-g3aa8b6308482-dirty References: <20240304132221.901327-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> <20240304132221.901327-6-c.heiss@proxmox.com> In-Reply-To: <20240304132221.901327-6-c.heiss@proxmox.com> X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL -0.097 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE -0.01 - Subject: Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs 5/9] package-repos: align wording with pmg-docs X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 05 Mar 2024 08:28:53 -0000 On Mon Mar 4, 2024 at 2:22 PM CET, Christoph Heiss wrote: > The `root@pam` user is notified via email about available updates. Click= the > 'Changelog' button in the GUI to see more details about the selected upd= ate. > =20 > -You need a valid subscription key to access the `pve-enterprise` reposit= ory. > -Different support levels are available. Further details can be found at > -{pricing-url}. > +As soon as updates are available, the `root@pam` user is notified via em= ail > +about the newly available packages. From the GUI, the 'Changelog' button= in the > +GUI can be used to see more details about the selected update. > +Thus, you will never miss important security fixes. The section about the 'Changelog' button is duplicated, it is already in the paragraph above. Also `GUI` appears twice in the same sentence, I would propose something like this (if we use the second sentence):=20 The 'Changelog' button in the GUI can be used to see more=20 details about the selected update.