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charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL -0.064 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE -0.01 - Subject: Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH v2 pve-docs 0/6] sdn: Documentation X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 18 Nov 2023 16:51:58 -0000 Am 17/11/2023 um 14:55 schrieb Stefan Lendl: > * Try to homogenize style and format > * Title case naming conventions for configuration options > * Simplify examples > * Re-phrase descriptions > > Changes to v1 -> v2: > > * Split changes per chapter. > * Use multi-line heading format like in the original file. > I used search and replace to "revert" and now the format is identical on all > headings. and never tested even a simple build... just great... asciidoc: ERROR: .asciidoc-pve-tmp4086737_pvesdn.adoc: line 912: [blockdef-listing] missing closing delimiter aciidoc error at ./asciidoc-pve line 424. make[3]: *** [pve-doc-generator.mk:75: chapter-pvesdn.html] Error 1 make[3]: *** Waiting for unfinished jobs.... asciidoc: ERROR: pvesdn.adoc: line 914: [blockdef-listing] missing closing delimiter make[3]: *** [Makefile:140: pve-admin-guide.pdf] Error 1 asciidoc: ERROR: pvesdn.adoc: line 914: [blockdef-listing] missing closing delimiter make[3]: *** [Makefile:146: pve-admin-guide.epub] Error 1 asciidoc: ERROR: pvesdn.adoc: line 914: [blockdef-listing] missing closing delimiter Maybe check the diff and ensuring that the headings stay untouched would help, the underline aligned with the width of the heading text for a reason.. Or well, a simple build test before sending this, that's the bare minimum that I expect! > > Stefan Lendl (6): > sdn: installation, overview and main configuration > sdn: Zones > sdn: VNets and Subnets > sdn: Controllers > sdn: IPAM > sdn: Examples > those subjects are borderline useless, there's at least a verb missing. > pvesdn.adoc | 906 +++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------------- > 1 file changed, 402 insertions(+), 504 deletions(-) >