From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [IPv6:2a01:7e0:0:424::9]) by lore.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 10DE71FF161 for ; Tue, 13 Aug 2024 15:59:13 +0200 (CEST) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 8E4303B82; Tue, 13 Aug 2024 15:59:27 +0200 (CEST) Message-ID: <4d06ab4e-e8fe-49f7-95e8-cb1751483671@proxmox.com> Date: Tue, 13 Aug 2024 15:58:54 +0200 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla Thunderbird From: Fiona Ebner To: Proxmox VE development discussion , Alexander Zeidler References: <20240813102305.6-2-a.zeidler@proxmox.com> <693d86ca-fb84-4d7c-bad7-ea6922f581ed@proxmox.com> Content-Language: en-US In-Reply-To: <693d86ca-fb84-4d7c-bad7-ea6922f581ed@proxmox.com> X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL -0.054 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE -0.01 - Subject: Re: [pve-devel] applied: [PATCH docs] pve-network: correct language errors X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Reply-To: Proxmox VE development discussion Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Errors-To: pve-devel-bounces@lists.proxmox.com Sender: "pve-devel" Am 13.08.24 um 15:57 schrieb Fiona Ebner: > Am 13.08.24 um 12:23 schrieb Alexander Zeidler: >> Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler >> --- >> pve-network.adoc | 4 ++-- >> 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) >> >> diff --git a/pve-network.adoc b/pve-network.adoc >> index acdcf39..434430d 100644 >> --- a/pve-network.adoc >> +++ b/pve-network.adoc >> @@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ slaves in the single logical bonded interface such that different >> network-peers use different MAC addresses for their network packet >> traffic. >> >> -If your switch support the LACP (IEEE 802.3ad) protocol then we recommend using >> +If your switch supports the LACP (IEEE 802.3ad) protocol then we recommend using >> the corresponding bonding mode (802.3ad). Otherwise you should generally use the >> active-backup mode. >> >> @@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ iface vmbr0 inet static >> >> >> [thumbnail="default-network-setup-bond.svg"] >> -Another possibility it to use the bond directly as bridge port. >> +Another possibility is to use the bond directly as bridge port. >> This can be used to make the guest network fault-tolerant. >> >> .Example: Use a bond as bridge port > > applied, thanks! While adding the missing comma Lukas noted and his R-b. I also added a follow-up using "as the bridge port" instead of "as bridge port" while at it. _______________________________________________ pve-devel mailing list pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel