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Subject: Re: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs v2 1/5] package-repos: improve wording
 partly based on pmg-docs
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On Mon, Mar 11, 2024 at 03:10:38PM +0100, Stefan Sterz wrote:
> On Mon Mar 11, 2024 at 1:29 PM CET, Christoph Heiss wrote:
[..]
> > diff --git a/pve-package-repos.adoc b/pve-package-repos.adoc
> > index b0c2a95..4586f70 100644
> > --- a/pve-package-repos.adoc
> > +++ b/pve-package-repos.adoc
> > @@ -8,6 +8,10 @@ endif::wiki[]
> >  {pve} uses http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Advanced_Packaging_Tool[APT] as its
> >  package management tool like any other Debian-based system.
> >
> > +{pve} automatically checks for package updates on a daily basis. The `root@pam`
> > +user is notified via email about available updates. From the GUI, The
>
> "The" at the end of this line should be lower case.

Indeed - thanks for taking a look & catching that!