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Subject: [pve-devel] applied-series: [PATCH v2 pve-docs 1/2] pmxcfs:
 language and style fixup
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On 14.09.21 18:14, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> minor language fixup
> replace usage of 'Proxmox VE' with '{pve}'
> 
> Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
> ---
> 
> Thanks for the feedback @lorenz!
> changes v2:
> - Refer to offline nodes as 'offline', rather than 'dead'
> 
>  pmxcfs.adoc | 68 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------------
>  1 file changed, 33 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-)
> 
>

applied both patches, thanks!