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From: Maximiliano Sandoval <m.sandoval@proxmox.com>
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Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH installer] license: Improve "For more
information" paragraph
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The sentence is phrased in a way which is not completely clear.
This matches the Backup Server license more closely:
For more information, visit <b>www.proxmox.com</b>
or the Proxmox Backup Server project page.
Signed-off-by: Maximiliano Sandoval <m.sandoval@proxmox.com>
---
Other alternatives:
- Remove the mention of the wiki altogether
- Say "the Proxmox VE project page" instead of the wiki
I opted for the current approach because it says the same in an easier to read
way.
html/pve/extract1-license.htm | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/html/pve/extract1-license.htm b/html/pve/extract1-license.htm
index 87963ab..9882068 100644
--- a/html/pve/extract1-license.htm
+++ b/html/pve/extract1-license.htm
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@
- Live Migration<br>
- 32 and 64 bit guests<br><br>
- Visit <b>www.proxmox.com</b>
- for additional information and the Wiki about Proxmox VE.
+ For more information, visit <b>www.proxmox.com</b>
+ or the Proxmox VE wiki.
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