From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) by lore.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id C46C01FF161 for ; Tue, 13 Aug 2024 12:24:12 +0200 (CEST) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id CBF113F36E; Tue, 13 Aug 2024 12:24:27 +0200 (CEST) From: Alexander Zeidler To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com Date: Tue, 13 Aug 2024 12:23:04 +0200 Message-Id: <20240813102305.6-1-a.zeidler@proxmox.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL 0.083 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment RCVD_IN_VALIDITY_CERTIFIED_BLOCKED 0.001 ADMINISTRATOR NOTICE: The query to Validity was blocked. See https://knowledge.validity.com/hc/en-us/articles/20961730681243 for more information. RCVD_IN_VALIDITY_RPBL_BLOCKED 0.001 ADMINISTRATOR NOTICE: The query to Validity was blocked. See https://knowledge.validity.com/hc/en-us/articles/20961730681243 for more information. RCVD_IN_VALIDITY_SAFE_BLOCKED 0.001 ADMINISTRATOR NOTICE: The query to Validity was blocked. See https://knowledge.validity.com/hc/en-us/articles/20961730681243 for more information. SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE -0.01 - Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs] local-zfs: correct language errors X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Reply-To: Proxmox VE development discussion Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Errors-To: pve-devel-bounces@lists.proxmox.com Sender: "pve-devel" Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler --- local-zfs.adoc | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/local-zfs.adoc b/local-zfs.adoc index 130f9d6..7ddf50a 100644 --- a/local-zfs.adoc +++ b/local-zfs.adoc @@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ recommend to: # zpool create -f -o ashift=12 log ---- -In above example a single `` and a single `` is used, but you +In the example above, a single `` and a single `` is used, but you can also combine this with other RAID variants, as described in the xref:sysadmin_zfs_create_new_zpool_raid0[Create a new pool with RAID] section. @@ -465,19 +465,19 @@ protection that you want to use for improving the overall performance of your pool. As the maximum size of a log device should be about half the size of the -installed physical memory, it means that the ZIL will mostly likely only take up +installed physical memory, it means that the ZIL will most likely only take up a relatively small part of the SSD, the remaining space can be used as cache. First you have to create two GPT partitions on the SSD with `parted` or `gdisk`. -Then you're ready to add them to an pool: +Then you're ready to add them to a pool: .Add both, a separate log device and a second-level cache, to an existing pool ---- # zpool add -f log cache ---- -Just replay ``, `` and `` with the pool name +Just replace ``, `` and `` with the pool name and the two `/dev/disk/by-id/` paths to the partitions. You can also add ZIL and cache separately. @@ -527,8 +527,8 @@ process of the new disk has progressed. # proxmox-boot-tool init [grub] ---- -NOTE: `ESP` stands for EFI System Partition, which is setup as partition #2 on -bootable disks setup by the {pve} installer since version 5.4. For details, see +NOTE: `ESP` stands for EFI System Partition, which is set up as partition #2 on +bootable disks when using the {pve} installer since version 5.4. For details, see xref:sysboot_proxmox_boot_setup[Setting up a new partition for use as synced ESP]. NOTE: Make sure to pass 'grub' as mode to `proxmox-boot-tool init` if @@ -541,7 +541,7 @@ especially if Secure Boot is enabled! # grub-install ---- NOTE: Plain GRUB is only used on systems installed with {pve} 6.3 or earlier, -which have not been manually migrated to using `proxmox-boot-tool` yet. +which have not been manually migrated to use `proxmox-boot-tool` yet. Configure E-Mail Notification -- 2.39.2 _______________________________________________ pve-devel mailing list pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com https://lists.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel