From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id C0068B8AB6 for ; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:44 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id A970E84C1 for ; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:44 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [94.136.29.106]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS for ; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:44 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id D6D0748909 for ; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:43 +0100 (CET) From: Christoph Heiss To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com Date: Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:10 +0100 Message-ID: <20240311122938.565228-5-c.heiss@proxmox.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.43.1 In-Reply-To: <20240311122938.565228-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> References: <20240311122938.565228-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL 0.005 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE -0.01 - Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs v2 4/5] installation: zfs-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 11 Mar 2024 12:29:44 -0000 These changes are the result of basically "diffing" both documentations, choosing the better prased/sounding sections. Some wording were also slightly changed as necessary to further improve them. The equivalent changes will be done for pmg-docs too, to ensure they are really the same in the end. Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss --- Changes v1 -> v2: * no changes pve-installation.adoc | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc index eaa800f..f4a898b 100644 --- a/pve-installation.adoc +++ b/pve-installation.adoc @@ -294,10 +294,10 @@ lvmthin snapshots). [[advanced_zfs_options]] Advanced ZFS Configuration Options ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -The installer creates the ZFS pool `rpool`. No swap space is created but you can -reserve some unpartitioned space on the install disks for swap. You can also -create a swap zvol after the installation, although this can lead to problems. -(see <>). +The installer creates the ZFS pool `rpool`, if ZFS is used. No swap space is +created but you can reserve some unpartitioned space on the install disks for +swap. You can also create a swap zvol after the installation, although this can +lead to problems (see xref:zfs_swap[ZFS swap notes]). `ashift`:: -- 2.43.1