From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (firstgate.proxmox.com [212.224.123.68]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by lists.proxmox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 1DF70B8AEC for ; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:30:15 +0100 (CET) Received: from firstgate.proxmox.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id 068968522 for ; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:45 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (proxmox-new.maurer-it.com [94.136.29.106]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by firstgate.proxmox.com (Proxmox) with ESMTPS for ; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:44 +0100 (CET) Received: from proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by proxmox-new.maurer-it.com (Proxmox) with ESMTP id D48FC48908 for ; Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:43 +0100 (CET) From: Christoph Heiss To: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com Date: Mon, 11 Mar 2024 13:29:07 +0100 Message-ID: <20240311122938.565228-2-c.heiss@proxmox.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.43.1 In-Reply-To: <20240311122938.565228-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> References: <20240311122938.565228-1-c.heiss@proxmox.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-SPAM-LEVEL: Spam detection results: 0 AWL 0.005 Adjusted score from AWL reputation of From: address BAYES_00 -1.9 Bayes spam probability is 0 to 1% DMARC_MISSING 0.1 Missing DMARC policy KAM_DMARC_STATUS 0.01 Test Rule for DKIM or SPF Failure with Strict Alignment SPF_HELO_NONE 0.001 SPF: HELO does not publish an SPF Record SPF_PASS -0.001 SPF: sender matches SPF record T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE -0.01 - Subject: [pve-devel] [PATCH docs v2 1/5] package-repos: improve wording partly based on pmg-docs X-BeenThere: pve-devel@lists.proxmox.com X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Proxmox VE development discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 11 Mar 2024 12:30:15 -0000 Some sentences are phrased better and more expansive in pmg-docs, so take them from there and adapt them as needed. Rephrases some redundant parts (e.g. enterprise repo introduction) and moves the email/changelog paragraph to the top, since that applies to all repos. Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss --- Changes v1 -> v2: * deduplicate email/changelog paragraph, move to top * deduplicate enterprise repo introduction sentence * very slightly reword some phrases pve-package-repos.adoc | 26 ++++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/pve-package-repos.adoc b/pve-package-repos.adoc index b0c2a95..4586f70 100644 --- a/pve-package-repos.adoc +++ b/pve-package-repos.adoc @@ -8,6 +8,10 @@ endif::wiki[] {pve} uses http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Advanced_Packaging_Tool[APT] as its package management tool like any other Debian-based system. +{pve} automatically checks for package updates on a daily basis. The `root@pam` +user is notified via email about available updates. From the GUI, The +'Changelog' button can be used to see more details about the selected update. + Repositories in {pve} ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ @@ -57,21 +61,18 @@ deb http://security.debian.org/debian-security bookworm-security main contrib {pve} Enterprise Repository ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -This is the default, stable, and recommended repository, available for all {pve} -subscription users. It contains the most stable packages and is suitable for -production use. The `pve-enterprise` repository is enabled by default: +This is the recommended repository and available for all {pve} subscription +users. It contains the most stable packages and is suitable for production use. +The `pve-enterprise` repository is enabled by default: .File `/etc/apt/sources.list.d/pve-enterprise.list` ---- deb https://enterprise.proxmox.com/debian/pve bookworm pve-enterprise ---- -The `root@pam` user is notified via email about available updates. Click the -'Changelog' button in the GUI to see more details about the selected update. - -You need a valid subscription key to access the `pve-enterprise` repository. -Different support levels are available. Further details can be found at -{pricing-url}. +Please note that you need a valid subscription key to access the +`pve-enterprise` repository. We offer different support levels, which you can +find further details about at {pricing-url}. NOTE: You can disable this repository by commenting out the above line using a `#` (at the start of the line). This prevents error messages if your host does @@ -82,9 +83,10 @@ repository in that case. {pve} No-Subscription Repository ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -This is the recommended repository for testing and non-production use. Its -packages are not as heavily tested and validated. You don't need a subscription key -to access the `pve-no-subscription` repository. +As the name suggests, you do not need a subscription key to access +this repository. It can be used for testing and non-production +use. It's not recommended to use this on production servers, as these +packages are not always as heavily tested and validated. We recommend to configure this repository in `/etc/apt/sources.list`. -- 2.43.1